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Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.08 - 06:18PM Title: In Too Deep
no i was glad that you still included gillyweed... i think i would have been sad if it hadn't been in there at all. great chapter!
Reviewer: elusive Signed Date: 2007.03.25 - 09:07PM Title: In Too Deep
I loved Fred's take on the tournament. It was great.
Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2006.09.18 - 07:06PM Title: In Too Deep
lol, i read ur response, ya i forgot that you promised not to kill him. :-) ok, im better now. and im looking forward to the last task!
Reviewer: Moonlight51 Signed Date: 2006.09.18 - 07:04PM Title: In Too Deep
No, don't kill fred! please don't do it!!! :'-(
i like how he used his brother as a float, thats really funny. i wonder if they had that planed ahead of time?
i hope the Weasely's get over their fear of harry and Ginny's bond. its a good thing. now neither of them will ever have their hearts broken, or have to spend a lot of time looking for the rih=ght one or wondering if they are the right person for them. i wish we had things like that in the real world, would make the love life stuff a lot easier.. :-)
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.09.07 - 10:18AM Title: In Too Deep
Well, transfiguring George into an inflatable raft seemed pretty original to me. :-}
Still quite good!
Reviewer: MischiefManaged Signed Date: 2006.09.05 - 12:17PM Title: In Too Deep
Oh my god! Do you know what I just thought of! What if Fred and Harry go to the Graveyard together! And Fred dies! NO! THAT CAN NOT HAPPEN! Sorry but I loooove Gred and Forge, and without Fred, it would just be George, and...no. That just CAN'T happen! You did a great job with Fred in the lake task and it was hilarious that he used George as a raft. And we all knew George would be what he missed most! Please Please Please update soon! I love this stpry I wanna know more!
Author's Response: Thanks.
It seems many people have forgotten that when I entered Fred in the tournament, I promised I wouldn't kill him. That's all I promised, but I did promise that.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2006.08.30 - 08:24PM Title: In Too Deep
well im glad to see that they all made it...fred was smart with gilly weed but the raft takes the cake....as for harry nice change....fluer was kind and ginny should know better but then again with the bond....vickor is vickor...kutgw
Author's Response: I've never read a story before where Fleur rescued her hostage, so I thought I'd write one. Ginny knows Harry isn't interested in Fleur, but that doesn't mean she wants Fleur to be after Harry.
Reviewer: GWeasley Anonymous Date: 2006.08.30 - 07:11PM Title: In Too Deep
Oh great chapter I love Molly's response. It was just so her looking at the small stuff and not the big picture. Well the second task felt rushed but I gues that is a side story right now so no bigie. Keep up the writing and up date soon. :)
Author's Response: I've never really liked the second task much. I did make one major change though. Now Fleur hasn't disgraced her school.
Reviewer: GinnyMarie Signed Date: 2006.08.30 - 07:02PM Title: In Too Deep
there would be a party in gryffindor tower tonight...
i loved the talk...poor sirius...having harry bait him like that during a very embarrassing conversation...
yeah...i wouldve been pissed towards molly as well...
loved this part...
“That’s for you and dad to worry about,” she said with a wicked grin.
it was funny...
loved this chapter...fred inflating george like that...priceless....that is so him...im actually kind of surprised that fred took gillyweed instead of harry...but you might have mentioned something about that before...
good chapter...love it...more soon...please...~Ginny M~
Author's Response: I enjoyed writing Harry & Sirius' talk!
Molly is way too over-protective.
I liked that line too.
I laughed when I came up with the idea of George becoming a raft. I thought it would be interesting to have Fred use the gillyweed, and no I didn't say anything about that before because it was a last-minute decision.
Reviewer: jennmariebr Signed Date: 2006.08.30 - 04:47PM Title: In Too Deep
Can't wait for the 3rd task. Loved George the human raft.
Poor Ginny and Harry. Getting fussed at by Molly because of their bond. You would think that she would trust her own daughter a little.
Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: GinnyW60631 Signed Date: 2006.08.30 - 04:44PM Title: In Too Deep
I really like this chapter!!1! update soon
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2006.08.30 - 04:19PM Title: In Too Deep
Good chapter. I found it sad that Molly don't trust Harry that much that she would think he is a low life. I do wonder if this would hurt Harry and Molly relationship. I alway thought he think of her as a mother. She did aoologized but could never take back the hurt words. I know that I say thing that hurt my sister and she may have forgave me but the hurt she felt would always be there.
Author's Response: It does hurt Harry and Molly's relationship. Molly's perspective is that she read how their feelings are enhanced and has the idea that they won't be able to resist their feelings, but she's giving them the impression that she just thinks badly of them, especially Harry.
You are right, those words can't be taken back no matter how much she apologizes.
Reviewer: Ginzig1 Signed Date: 2006.08.30 - 01:55PM Title: In Too Deep
If Molly doesn't stop, she's going to push Ginny right into bed with Harry. Mothers do not handle that type of thing well, but maybe if Arthur calms her, it will keep her from hurting Ginny any more. Great job with this chapter. I am looking forward to more!
