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Reviewer: juice14 Signed Date: 2009.08.17 - 02:56AM Title: Happy Birthday, Ginny
Hmmm a lot of liberty with all the small pins and stuff that are charmed against Unforgivables....
Not that you don't have creative license... but perhaps a little bit more backstory could be good? Such powerful magical artifacts shouldn't be easy to come by ya know? :)
Reviewer: elusive Signed Date: 2007.03.24 - 07:37PM Title: Happy Birthday, Ginny
“I love you too, and I think you can wait a few minutes,” Ginny said as she proceeded to snog him senseless.
She does that a lot. With the same wording. I wasn't sure if that was intentional.
Reviewer: noylj Signed Date: 2006.08.08 - 10:30PM Title: Happy Birthday, Ginny
It's "another think coming." Why does the younger generation not know these things?
Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2006.04.09 - 03:04PM Title: Happy Birthday, Ginny
I loved the story Harry gave to Vernon!!!!!
Author's Response: So did I! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: the DragonBard Signed Date: 2006.04.09 - 01:13PM Title: Happy Birthday, Ginny
I do have one problem.
One of the reasons the Imperius curse is considered an 'Unforgiveable' is because there is 'no' known means of magically protecting against it. The gold rose shouldn't claim to do so.
Author's Response: Really? I'll look that up in GoF. If you're correct, I'll change it. Thanks.
Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2006.04.09 - 08:30AM Title: Happy Birthday, Ginny
Haha, great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.04.08 - 11:41PM Title: Happy Birthday, Ginny
Good thing Harry remembered about Ginny's birthday, then, eh? :-)
Well done -- Harry's ruse in the final scene was priceless.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I truly enjoyed writing his ruse!
