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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2013.04.21 - 10:10PM Title: Just in Time/Back to the Dursleys

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Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.07 - 08:57PM Title: Just in Time/Back to the Dursleys

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lol i love how you summarized the entire ending of PoA in like 5 sentences... it was perfect... i also liked how harry defended ginny when vernon reacted in teh only way that could be expected... digust. the only other thing that i would expect for him to say would be something along the lines of " hand me downs from a boy... well i'm not suprised that thats the best you could do" or something along those lines... although probably put much more eloquently.... love it!



Reviewer: elusive Signed Date: 2007.03.24 - 07:11PM Title: Just in Time/Back to the Dursleys

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I liked this chapter. Of course, I've liked all your chapters so far. You're a great writer.



Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2006.04.02 - 05:38PM Title: Just in Time/Back to the Dursleys

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I loved how you crammed the entire climax of the third book into three paragraphs. That's pretty awesome. LOL, I LOOOOVED these chapters. Great Job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.04.02 - 04:46PM Title: Just in Time/Back to the Dursleys

A little "jumpy," but I understand that you're intentionaly avoiding going over "canon" material that isn't changed materially. The story is coming along well, I think.

Not sure about poisting 2 chapters in a single submission, though -- that seems confusing.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.04.02 - 04:41PM Title: Just in Time/Back to the Dursleys

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A little "jumpy," but I understand that you're intentionaly avoiding going over "canon" material that isn't changed materially. The story is coming along well, I think.

Not sure about poisting 2 chapters in a single submission, though -- that seems confusing.

Author's Response: Thank you. I only like to write what I'm changing, not what I'm keeping materially the same. I figure that everyone who reads my story has already read the "canon" novels. This site doesn't allow a chapter with less than 1,000 words, therefore, the only way to submit the second chapter was to combine it.



Reviewer: zd2000 Signed Date: 2006.04.01 - 05:52PM Title: Just in Time/Back to the Dursleys

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amazing story ive loved the story from the beggining and still love it you have amazing talent

Author's Response: Thank you very much.




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