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Reviewer: juice14 Signed Date: 2009.08.17 - 02:45AM Title: Memories
Hmmm instead of inserting chapters into the books, why not write something more fluent? So far the story is mostly ok ....
The initial link between H/G seems arbitrary ... I know I have more to read but up to this point the flow of things seems disjointed.
Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.07 - 08:16PM Title: Memories
wow he really can be dense! lol... i like the idea of ginny returning to the chamber on the one year anniversary to find a degree of closure... this is a really great story... and its cool to think about all the other ways that the stories could have played out... and, as i am a sucker for romance, i love how you incorporated that into the story right away. great job!
Reviewer: elusive Signed Date: 2007.03.24 - 06:42PM Title: Memories
Ron is so thick. That's ok. I love him anyway.
Reviewer: L_J_4eva Signed Date: 2006.07.09 - 04:59AM Title: Memories
I feel 'familiar' with some of the chamber part and parts even in other stories ;^) *hint hint wink wink nudge nudge cough cough*!
Author's Response: Maybe, but this is the story I first wrote the chamber scene for. I figured it would still look the same in any story.
Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2006.03.26 - 10:15AM Title: Memories
A very nice chapter. I'm glad Harry was able to tell Ginny what happened while she was unconscious. Well done.
Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2006.03.26 - 10:02AM Title: Memories
Haha! Ron;s so blunt and clueless. That's why he needs Hermione. Yup. Loved this chapter:)
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.03.25 - 07:23PM Title: Memories
That would, indeed, be difficult for Ginny, especially given her nightmares of late. Quite well done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2006.03.25 - 04:58PM Title: Memories
Ron is utterly clueless. lol
Author's Response: He always has been, and always will be!
Reviewer: ttestagr Signed Date: 2006.03.25 - 04:14PM Title: Memories
Very good chapter. Original too. This is the first fic I've read that showed Ginny dealing with the anniversery of her trip into the Chamber and Harry saving her
Author's Response: Thank you. I just thought she would be thinking about her experience on that day, and I thought that going back into the
Chamber is something she might want to do.
