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Reviewer: Blitzstrahl Signed Date: 2015.07.18 - 12:02AM Title: After the Chamber Snogging isn't so bad at 12, at 11 the crowd I was around where doing more than that, letting girls touch are "wands" in exchange for "Quaffle" grouping if you can my meaning. Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2013.04.21 - 07:54PM Title: After the Chamber It funny that Hermione would tell Harry he has the courage to face danger but can't face a 11 year old girl, it take a different kind of courage to face a enemy or catch a snitch while injured then a young girl. With facing a enemy Harry knew what was on the line which is his life, Ginny's life, stone and Weasley family getting hurt if anything happen to Ginny, now facing Ginny would seem an lot harder then a enemy. Reviewer: SYLVELLE Signed Date: 2012.11.19 - 03:36PM Title: After the Chamber Cute so far, but really, 11 and 12 years old.. Don't think they'd be 'snogging' Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.08.25 - 04:14AM Title: After the Chamber very good start to the story love the lines the girls used to get Harry to man up was very funny. But to me I don't know seems they are a bit young for going out and snogging already though your story so we shall see where you take us just would of prefered you to hold off on this for a bit. Reviewer: HG4HOOD Signed Date: 2008.06.19 - 10:17AM Title: After the Chamber Nice story I have to say, you didn't put to much emphasizes on things which didn't matter to the story, such as Ginny always b.b-hexing people; and harry becoming so powerful that he can fight Dumbledore and become an Animagus in the space of weeks as such as other stories do in which annoy the hell out of me. Nice solid story. so good i sayed up 6 hours over my bed time.....lol. 4.5/5 from the boy down under. Reviewer: googol Signed Date: 2008.02.23 - 06:40AM Title: After the Chamber Magical bond? Well that makes perfect sense! Reviewer: hogwartsprincess Signed Date: 2007.09.16 - 03:40PM Title: After the Chamber Honestly, I don't think Harry and Ginny are too young to be snogging. First of all, both have grown up faster than normal due to their confrontations with Voldemort. Second of all, anyone who thinks kids from twelve to fifteen don't kiss or even more are just delusional. I know there have been girls and guys who have had sex in middle school around the ages of Ginny and Harry. Especially if they have a bond, I think Harry and Ginny are more than ready to snog. Anyway, great story! Reviewer: kingbobrules Signed Date: 2007.06.29 - 03:35PM Title: After the Chamber I for one just want 2 say that the fledgeling relationship between Ginn and Harry seems to me to be quite realistic. I'm not saying it's exactly right, but it's certainly believable. This is a really sweet story! Reviewer: cantante Signed Date: 2007.06.07 - 06:21PM Title: After the Chamber lol i love this: "magical bond has formed between them... It will be fully explained in the chapter called, "The Bond Explained." thats hilarious. just the way you put it i mean... i do like the story though. its fun.. and i dont think they're snogging too early/young... i would if they were anyone else but these characters have been through so much. they really are very mature for their ages... they seem to be about 2-3 years older than they actually are... at least! Reviewer: werekitten Signed Date: 2007.05.26 - 08:51PM Title: After the Chamber Erm. Well, it looks like quite an interesting beginning, but I find it totally unrealistic how they are snogging "passionately" at the ages of 11 and 12. I can tell you that very few 'couples' of that age even kiss, especially if they've been dating for all of an hour. Ron's reaction was well done, and I like the origan scenario. So overall, this would be a great beginning for a 5/6th year Ginny and Harry! Reviewer: SunlightDust Anonymous Date: 2007.05.24 - 06:25AM Title: After the Chamber Hehe yeah, I was thinking that they were a little young, but now that you've given an explanation I can barely find anything to fault at all. The only thing I suggest is more elaboration from an entirely selfish point of view, since more description makes the chapter last longer ^_^ Great start! Reviewer: elusive Signed Date: 2007.03.24 - 05:26PM Title: After the Chamber Yay! Harry and Ginny should have started dating a lot earlier, anyway. This story is gonna be good, I can tell. Reviewer: nevascared Signed Date: 2006.11.07 - 09:04PM Title: After the Chamber thy r way 2 young 2 b snoggin already Reviewer: PotterBoy90 Signed Date: 2006.11.04 - 12:50AM Title: After the Chamber Hmm..bit young for snogging dont'cha think? haha i ont care.. i love Harry/Ginny-ness!!! ahaha! Reviewer: Izzieluv Signed Date: 2006.08.31 - 08:57PM Title: After the Chamber “Where do you think Ron learned how to play?” made me laugh and I just about died at “What’s wrong Ron? Were you hoping for an enlargement charm?” Reviewer: Baby_Huey Signed Date: 2006.08.07 - 09:28PM Title: After the Chamber Okay, after readind the first few paragraphs of chapter 1 i have noticed a few thing that really need to be changed. get rid of the whole voice in harry's head thing, it is rather annoying. also there is a lot of stuff that you have written that just does not need to be there. you can actually remove about 45% from each paragraph and it would be much better written. remember sometimes less is more. Reviewer: Taku Signed Date: 2006.07.29 - 06:52PM Title: After the Chamber Remember Harry is only 12 years old and had for his first 11 years nearly no chance to gather social experiences. Here he acts far to well. It also does not help to solve all (of her) problems in one go. They are getting far to fast comfortable with each other, It takes less than 5 minutes to get them talking about their innermost feelings, given your own preset this is more than unlikely. At this point they are little less than strangers to each other. Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 07:42AM Title: After the Chamber Just read this chapter again, and I have to say I love it as much as I loved it when I first read it. Its just like Ron to be a git. Can't wait to see what happens. | |||||||
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