Reviews For As Mad As Ajax
Reviewer: running_swift Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 01:24PM Title: As Mad As Ajax Snape... Rosmerta... huh? What an odd pairing. I don't see how it works, but I'll just accept it and get on with the story itself.
This was so good!!!!!! Even the Snape/Rosmerta thing didn't bring it down. I don't think it's wrong, but... 'tis quite unfathomable, to be truthful. I adore the girls' opening defeat. Although they do complain a lot... don't they?
Me like. Again, you go, Torak!! Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 01:23PM Title: As Mad As Ajax Neville and Luna, very sweet, though I know I'm delusional. Ron, Hermione, Harry, Ginny, Dean, Seamus, Lav and the rest of the crew... I wonder if Rosemerta dipped into her own stash of oak matured mead. Snape is the last person in the world I would have imagined. Although even a mysterious, greasy-haired, hook-nosed Potions Master deserves a Happy Valentines. ~Patrony :) Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 12:11AM Title: As Mad As Ajax I knew that you would beat the deadline. It was great. Angst really does cause angst...for us. The girls were right...we men can be useless on Valentine's Day. I forgot to get my wife a card, and my daughter Loony kicked me when I stole some of her candy. Snape and a certain Witch...hmm. Well there is someone for everyone. Thanks. Eric Reviewer: Telwyn Dubois Signed Date: 2006.02.14 - 11:06PM Title: As Mad As Ajax Severus Snape? Severus Snape? SNAPE?
I've gone into a terrible fit of giggles. Torak, darling, you've simply outdone yourself with that gift for dialogue. I know you didn't want to do angst...*defeated sigh* I love angst - I live for it. But humor is wonderful too. Especially your brand. It's almost like I can see a movie unrolling when you tell a story. Usually I complain loudly about not enough description, but the dialogue really carries the story along - it seems to work. Luna and Neville...even though JKR insists that they will never be a couple, they seem to fit together so well, yeah?
Telly
Anyway, good job and good luck in the challenge! (Reviewed for judging purposes, btw) | |||||||
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