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Reviewer: running_swift Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 01:24PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Snape... Rosmerta... huh? What an odd pairing. I don't see how it works, but I'll just accept it and get on with the story itself. This was so good!!!!!! Even the Snape/Rosmerta thing didn't bring it down. I don't think it's wrong, but... 'tis quite unfathomable, to be truthful. I adore the girls' opening defeat. Although they do complain a lot... don't they? Me like. Again, you go, Torak!!

Author's Response: Yup - I was giggling insanely while I was writing that lot.



Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 01:23PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Neville and Luna, very sweet, though I know I'm delusional. Ron, Hermione, Harry, Ginny, Dean, Seamus, Lav and the rest of the crew... I wonder if Rosemerta dipped into her own stash of oak matured mead. Snape is the last person in the world I would have imagined. Although even a mysterious, greasy-haired, hook-nosed Potions Master deserves a Happy Valentines. ~Patrony :)

Author's Response: Yes, Rosmerta/Snape seems to have surprised people a bit. What can I say? I just like playing with people's heads. :-)



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 12:11AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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I knew that you would beat the deadline. It was great. Angst really does cause angst...for us. The girls were right...we men can be useless on Valentine's Day. I forgot to get my wife a card, and my daughter Loony kicked me when I stole some of her candy. Snape and a certain Witch...hmm. Well there is someone for everyone. Thanks. Eric

Author's Response: Deadlines? We don't need no steeenking deadlines! I shall fear no dates...



Reviewer: Telwyn Dubois Signed Date: 2006.02.14 - 11:06PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Severus Snape? Severus Snape? SNAPE? I've gone into a terrible fit of giggles. Torak, darling, you've simply outdone yourself with that gift for dialogue. I know you didn't want to do angst...*defeated sigh* I love angst - I live for it. But humor is wonderful too. Especially your brand. It's almost like I can see a movie unrolling when you tell a story. Usually I complain loudly about not enough description, but the dialogue really carries the story along - it seems to work. Luna and Neville...even though JKR insists that they will never be a couple, they seem to fit together so well, yeah? Telly Anyway, good job and good luck in the challenge! (Reviewed for judging purposes, btw)

Author's Response: THanks! Yeah, I thought it would be amusing to show Snape in a way that he's clearly never going to appear in canon. It was tricky trying to find a red herring to throw the readers off Rosmerta's scent, though.




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