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Reviewer: Mistress of Potions Signed Date: 2010.07.22 - 01:04AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Snape & Rosemerta? Whoa, I didn't see that one coming!



Reviewer: KateriBella Signed Date: 2008.02.06 - 10:26PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Such angst, Torak...where do you keep it all? He he he he...wouldn't Ron be peeved if he were to find out about Rosmerta and Snape? Well done! :oD



Reviewer: Gusty_Ginny Signed Date: 2007.01.22 - 04:34PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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LOL!
i agree with gentleginny9, you should do a Dumbledore and McGgonagall



Reviewer: Sovran Signed Date: 2006.08.04 - 10:00AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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A fun take on the challenge (even if I'm late finding it). You handled the dialogue well and managed to convey what you needed without having the guys and girls slip out of character. My only thought was that I'm not sure if Hermione or Ginny would snap first. I can certainly accept that it was Hermione, though. Lavender's failed 'attack' on Seamus and the resulting reactions were priceless.



Reviewer: GentleGinny9 Signed Date: 2006.07.03 - 09:23AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Ahhh, a rare story, the kind of story that is so funny but you're to eager to read the rest and once you're done you burst out laughing for as long as it took you to read the story.
I like the real snape, much better than the greasy haired git. But couldn't you of added Dumbledore and Mcgonnagal that would of been hilarious! (Yeah I know i spelled Mcgonnagal wrong) Its hard to spell.



Reviewer: magdalene rose Anonymous Date: 2006.03.14 - 04:16PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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very nice.... with some very strange pairs too...

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Reviewer: Astrid_rose Anonymous Date: 2006.03.08 - 10:46PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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A lot of fun. I liked the changing perspectives throughout the week.

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Reviewer: mooglelover333 Anonymous Date: 2006.03.04 - 08:38PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Ahh! So funny! I loved it! You had me in stitches the entite time! Snape with Rosmerta is priceless! That would be an interesting ship: Pretty, sparkly-heeled Rosmerta with greasy, grey-underwear Snape. Lol, I can just imagine it now! Dean saw Lavender on Seasmus's bed, very nice reaction. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Reviewer: noylj Anonymous Date: 2006.03.03 - 09:45AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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I'm really squeed out...Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Author's Response: You don't like Snape/Rosmerta? :-) I just needed an utterly implausible ship. Have some charcoal tablets to settle your stomach.

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Reviewer: lucky_black_cat Signed Date: 2006.02.28 - 10:28AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Great story. The dialogue was great, I laughed so hard I almost fell off my chair, specially with Friday... haha. Torak, you have a gift for humour, really. Congratulations, you deserved it. Oh, and nice title... *g*

Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, and here - have a seat belt.



Reviewer: sugarquill112 Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 11:33PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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That really was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing. Read for judging. Good luck!



Reviewer: Merlani Signed Date: 2006.02.25 - 08:49PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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I read your story for judging purposes. Good Luck!



Reviewer: KikiDeeDee Anonymous Date: 2006.02.22 - 07:37AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Just judged for the Challenge. Nice entry. Good Luck Kiki

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Reviewer: Compulsive Editor Anonymous Date: 2006.02.18 - 04:04AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Feet up the wall? Very comfortable, I'll have you know. Anyway, I like the way you use conversation to paint a picture - and I will probably still chuckle for quite a few days at some of the scenes. ... Toast indeed.....

Author's Response: Hehe - it may be noticeable that I spent the days before writing this watching lots and lots of episodes of The West Wing; the dialogue, i think, comes off much snappier than I usually write. Thanks!

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Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2006.02.17 - 02:28PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Read for judging. Interesting story, to say the least. Even though JKR sank Neville/Luna, your depiction of their date and their conversation was hilarious. LOL! Flitwick/Vector? Snape/Rosmerta? That's right, you do write about some rather original ships. I'm still trying to figure that one out after the events of HBP. Well, at least the boys do it right in the end, even if it is Puddifoots. Overall, great and funny story as always. Good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: I should point out that I don't actually ship those; they just seemed to work for the story. Besides, the canon hasn't sunk N/L yet, just an interview. To be honest, though, I don't actually see the canon Luna as the "real" Luna, so....



Reviewer: billybob Signed Date: 2006.02.16 - 01:26PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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read for judging



Reviewer: running_swift Signed Date: 2006.02.16 - 08:45AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

This is not lisa...tis her friend who thinks your story is very good. AND I didn't hack into her account, i go to school with her and i couldn't be bothered to change accounts. Well done - hilarious story - had me in stitches - or nearly stitches as lisa is so kind to point out. Snape/Rosmerta? Hmmm. Er...Interesting...Not what i would have chosen but oh well. Must admit, though, Lisa is much faster than me...i didn't actually get it until the end...I don't have that amazing ability of psychicness. I can dream. This review is now long enough and it is stretching my lazy abilities. Feel priviledged. Buh- Bye!

Author's Response: Ithangyew! Yeah, Lisa saw the Snape/Rosmerta thing coming, which was mildly annoying. What a waste of a perfectly good red herring. :-p



Reviewer: mathematemike Anonymous Date: 2006.02.16 - 08:00AM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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A very different approach to Valentine's Day and, as usual, very humerous dialogue.

Author's Response: Elephants are blue, monkeys are green. That's the oddest spelling I've ever seen.

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Reviewer: Jaquelyne Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 11:25PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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judged for competition



Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2006.02.15 - 02:05PM Title: As Mad As Ajax

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Andrew my dear.... Yeah- Angst really isn't you- and SNAPE! Happy!? What kind of bubble gum are you chewing because its gotta be something funky (I would get a refund). I did like it though... but Severus and Rosemerta!!! AHHHHHHHHHHH! Nice, very original! Cori

Author's Response: Don't fear the monkeys... walk towards the light....

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