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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2010.06.06 - 11:57AM Title: 1

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Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2009.03.16 - 05:52PM Title: 1

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funny story
poor Ron



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.12.24 - 04:20AM Title: 1

Well I will say it was funny damn funny at that. LOL and OMG that was a poem and a half would hope that Ron really isn't that dumb. I do like the idea of your Fred and George expansion even though not anywhere near being cannon or ever being cannon I thought it was funny. BUT I do think the idea of Ginny you had really wasn't a great idea I mean that is their sister and I doubt they would do that in front of so many people.... I don't know that I felt kind of threw the stroy but it was funny and I did check my cannon opinions at the door just the Ginny thing I couldn't over look. I will say good story though and I did laugh quite a bit.



Reviewer: borokat Signed Date: 2008.07.01 - 10:25PM Title: 1

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Reviewer: hmrpotter Signed Date: 2007.12.06 - 08:59AM Title: 1

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Reviewer: HGLadyy Signed Date: 2007.11.25 - 01:51AM Title: 1

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Amazing! couldnt stop reading, though Luna was a BIT Out of Character!
Great job anywho! love harry in this... so shy and coy and humble... *sigh*

Anywho, 10/10! Great worK! i loved it! :)



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.04.20 - 08:50AM Title: 1

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well that was really sweet and weird all at the same time...very confusing, but still good.



Reviewer: sugarquill112 Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 11:40PM Title: 1

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Interesting story though a little too long. Read for judging purposes. Good luck!



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 12:28PM Title: 1

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This was an interesting story. It was a bit outside of the Challenge's guidelines, and more than a little outside of most characterizations, but it did have some likable points. The blue rose was excellent, and I really enjoyed Ron's reaction to Hermione being at the club (if not her being there). I'm afraid that I normally do not read R-rated stories, Challenges being the exception.



Reviewer: Merlani Signed Date: 2006.02.25 - 08:50PM Title: 1

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Read for judging purpose. Good Luck



Reviewer: KikiDeeDee Anonymous Date: 2006.02.22 - 07:35AM Title: 1

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Just judged for the Challenge. Good Luck Kiki

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Reviewer: emily Anonymous Date: 2006.02.20 - 04:25PM Title: 1

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awesome.

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Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2006.02.17 - 07:06PM Title: 1

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Judging for Challenge. This was a really good story, I loved the blue rose... how unique! I hope you do well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Reviewer: billybob Signed Date: 2006.02.16 - 06:09PM Title: 1

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read for judging



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2006.02.15 - 04:44PM Title: 1

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Judged for competition. Hmmm, interesting story. I notice that you decided to write more about the weekend visit to Hogsmeade than the angsty Valentine's Tuesday. And it's rated R -- such fics, while not forbidden, are discouraged. Those twins! You know that they wouldn't just sit and let them ban all their products at Hogwarts, So they open up in Hogsmeade and add a gentleman's club. I'm surprised the teachers don't just ban all Hogsmeade visits! Neviile/Luna -- a ship that remains popular, despite JKR telling us that the ship won't occur in canon. Myrtle/Crabbe/Goyle was hilarious, though! It's good to see Hary come to his senses. Ginny is in danger regardless on whether she openly dates Harry. Overall, nice job. I wish you luck in the challenge!



Reviewer: Telwyn Dubois Signed Date: 2006.02.12 - 10:59AM Title: 1

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I must admit that it's a very creative story - you've certainly strayed outside of the challenge guidelines. Some of your dialogue could use a little work, and a few of your plot devices seem rather improbable - Hermione filling in for the other girl? Your bath scene was excellent, and I found Crabbe & Goyle/Moaning Myrtle absolutely hilarious. However, I believe the challenge was to discuss the girls' problems - I don't think they were ever actually supposed to go to Hogsmeade. At any rate, good job and good luck in the challenge! Telly



Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2006.02.11 - 07:09PM Title: 1

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Excellent! "Harry, if it's my life we're talking about here, shouldn't I get a say so in this? Look, none of us know the future. But what I do know for certain, is that if the worst happens, I don't want to die wondering what could have been. I want to live life, Harry, not just exist waiting to die." Great line...



Reviewer: dobbysgirl Anonymous Date: 2006.02.11 - 06:59PM Title: 1

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I love your story sooo much, I can't believe there's only 2 reviews. You deserve like20. Anyway thanks for writting such an awesome fic!

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Reviewer: won won Anonymous Date: 2006.02.11 - 06:21PM Title: 1

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oh how sweet. One thing is I do not think hermione would be at the bar.

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Reviewer: lola Anonymous Date: 2006.02.11 - 04:39PM Title: 1

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ui, i was laughing al the time and i think it´s not only funny and fluffy, than really ... *evilgrin* I love it and maybe because i hate valentine, but this one is really good (the bathscene..., hermione with all the fruit...)

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