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Reviewer: GodricsPhoenix Signed Date: 2008.03.31 - 11:23PM Title: Upset and Insight

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GREAT story!!



Reviewer: GinervaMollyWeasley Signed Date: 2006.08.23 - 10:05PM Title: Upset and Insight

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I loved it. Yes, Ron is good for some things.. and downright hot at other times, too. But Harry is hotter.

Sorry... getting off the subject...
Seriously... it was good. I can just imagine the Gryffindor girls getting together to form a group for theif various problems. ha.. just love it. Another one in my favorites... i probably have like 100 now..
~GMW



Reviewer: Merlani Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 12:17AM Title: Upset and Insight

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read for judging purpose. good luck!



Reviewer: billybob Signed Date: 2006.02.23 - 07:33PM Title: Upset and Insight

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read for judging



Reviewer: KikiDeeDee Anonymous Date: 2006.02.21 - 02:06PM Title: Upset and Insight

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Judged for the Challenge. Nice little entry. Sneaky to put the good bit right at the end. Good Luck Kiki



Reviewer: jaquelyne and mom Anonymous Date: 2006.02.17 - 10:19AM Title: Upset and Insight

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red for contest.



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.02.10 - 10:19PM Title: Upset and Insight

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Even prat brothers are useful huh? This 'circle' support group is an interesting idea. It could be useful for all manner of insightful dialogue. I would love to hear them again on Saturday after the trip to Hogsmeade. Thanks. Eric B.



Reviewer: sugarquill112 Signed Date: 2006.02.06 - 07:27AM Title: Upset and Insight

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I enjoyed reading your fic. It is rather short but interesting. I really liked 'The Circle'; it's quite intriguing. It's good that you used the bonus phrases. I read and reviewed this for judging purposes. Best of luck for the contest.

Author's Response: I never seem to write at desent length so I know this. And the bonus phrases were fun and enjoyable! I had to use them! It makes the piece more interesting. And thank you!



Reviewer: Telwyn Dubois Signed Date: 2006.02.06 - 12:44AM Title: Upset and Insight

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Read for judging purposes. I like the idea of a "circle", and Ginny being in charge of everything. There are a few grammar issues, but they are so miniscule, it's not worth pointing out. Gin's use of Hermione's famous last words was apt, though the going starkers part seemed a bit forced. At any rate, it was a nice read, so good luck in the challenge! Telly

Author's Response: As I think I've said before in a previous review, I sort of conveyed the idea of the "Centre" from my public school into this in a sort of twisted odd way. Ginny isn't really in charge of it...just someone who stands up first in the circle. That's how it goes really, the first to speak is incharge of that discussion. Yes, I'm not one for grammar really so I guess I'd expect that. I thought Hermione's words were colorful, so I might as well add some more to the story. The starkers thing...ha, that was just a spur of the moment really and yes, it is quite forced, more than a bit in my opinion yet I won't change it; it adds good comedy. Thank You.



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2006.01.25 - 01:15AM Title: Upset and Insight

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Nice little ficlet, albeit a little on the short side. You state that this is a seventh-year fic, but without the horcruxes. That's OK -- I suppose the horcrux hunt wouldn't quite fit here. That's an interesting idea, there being a place where Ginny and her roommates regularly meet to discuss -- what else -- boys. At least Ginny has a good day coming up with Harry after all. Overall, short and sweet. I wish you luck in the challenge.

Author's Response: Yes, it is, without the horcruxes. I suppose a bit of Alternate Universe I'd suppose. I do have plans to change it up a bit and turn it into a full lenth fanfiction. Thank you.



Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2006.01.24 - 12:04AM Title: Upset and Insight

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Judging for Challenge. I found it very interesting and like I said in my previous review... I liked the idea. I also liked how Ginny quoted Hermione in the last few lines. Well done. I hope you do well!

Author's Response: Oh thank you.



Reviewer: Beanie Signed Date: 2006.01.23 - 07:06PM Title: Upset and Insight

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Hehe, that was nifty. Turn out another chapter soon, 'kay? It made me giggle! And it had potential to be something truely brilliant. It just leaves a lot of room for a good plot, you know? PS: Is everyone getting their stories reviewed by a common beta? 'Cause you're the second person I've seen who spells "of course" "of coarse". PS Number Two: I give it a ten! =D

Author's Response: It's a one shot, but after this contest I may turn it out and about to a sequal. And my spelling is never good, but I dunno, I've always spelled 'of course' 'of coarse'. It comes naturally to me and I just don't know. It's sort of odd. Like perhaps the way I sometimes have Harry say 'odd really' often, for I do it myself. It's just a habit.



Reviewer: cori_b Anonymous Date: 2006.01.22 - 10:14PM Title: Upset and Insight

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sweet, In the school where I live they have something like "a Circle" but its called osmething diffrent. Its primarily a place wehre teens get guidance from a teacher and teens.

Author's Response: I'd gotten the idea from something like that. At my public school some of the girls meet in the bathroom and talk about things over study hall. It's called 'The Centre'.



Reviewer: greybackfenrir Anonymous Date: 2006.01.22 - 09:48PM Title: Upset and Insight

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humorous fic that I quite enjoyed. : )

Author's Response: Thank you greatly.



Reviewer: Ginebra Wood Signed Date: 2006.01.22 - 12:44PM Title: Upset and Insight

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Good one really, I found the Circlke very usefull. I qill judging your ficf. Good Luck

Author's Response: I thought perhaps since it was supposed to be a group of girls getting into discusion I might as well go all out with this 'circle'. I am happy to have you judge, may you have the good luck.



Reviewer: The Real Nymphadora Signed Date: 2006.01.22 - 08:34AM Title: Upset and Insight

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oh that was very good (hehe)

Author's Response: Ah, thank you!




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