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Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2022.01.06 - 04:57PM Title: Chapter 4

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This was great! I love mysteries (though I am always rubbish at figuring them out). And I do love the idea of Malfoy and Harry forced to awkwardly rub elbows from time to time. It is too bad there couldn't have been more Ginny, but she was great here :)

I'd love to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I just did a longish Ginny fic for Christmas, as you read, now I'm rotating back to other characters... but we will definitely see more of this Harpy ;)



Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2021.12.02 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 4

A bit obvious to who it was going to be, but the character interactions were all excellent. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and for telling me what was good and what was "obvious". Yeah it kind of was, wasn't it, haha. This is my first stab at a mystery. I'll try and do better next go round. Thank you again.



Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2021.12.02 - 06:37PM Title: Chapter 4

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A bit obvious to who it was going to be, but the character interactions were all excellent. Good job.



Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2021.10.05 - 10:19PM Title: Chapter 4

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Coming out of lurking mode to review this one. :)

Really loved this. I feel like we don’t see enough Auror mysteries in Harry/Ginny fanfics, and this was definitely a good one! Love how it all came together in the end, and the antidote was clever. I had two theories about the killer. One was the correct person, wrong motive. The other was when I was convinced it was the way too helpful server, and I was horrified that Harry just drank the coffee she gave him as if she wasn’t too alarmingly friendly to have a benign role in a murder mystery!

Author's Response: Thank you for the great and detailed review. I didn't notice it immediately as the review alert system is down. Yes I agree that there aren't enough Auror mysteries, and I hope I'll add more in time to come. This fic was a bit of a rush job and I hope to improve. I notice you have a nice long mystery fic yourself, I will be checking it out.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2021.09.20 - 08:14PM Title: Chapter 4

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Terrific ending! Carrie was my lead suspect because she was wounded not killed - very convenient! She was clever tho but not clever enough! Three cheers for Harry - I'm sure Ginny will reward him later! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you! I will have to make it less convenient next time then, haha!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2021.09.18 - 04:25PM Title: Chapter 4

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Good one. I enjoyed it very much!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2021.09.18 - 04:08PM Title: Chapter 4

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Very nice….a little fast but since everything was staying at the pub, it works…..wonder how daphine made out in the end with the pub and her ex flame….. kutgw

Author's Response: Thank you. You're quite right, it was too fast, but I had a challenge deadline and I had to throw it in. I don't think Daphne's illicit relationship will go anywhere, but maybe she will succeed in revitalising the business, who knows




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