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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2020.12.31 - 07:37PM Title: Chapter 44
I been waiting for Scorpius and Lily to happen forever! I've been binge reading this story over the past few days and it is amazing! I love how you've written the characters and I like that the next gen aren't the one dimensional kids you see in so many next gen stories. You've allowed James to grow up and I really like your version of Scorpius. Your OCs are very well done and aren't perfect. I think that's one of the things I like the best, none of these characters are perfect and they all have work they need to do, just like really people!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was exactly what I was going for!! Growing these kids has been a real joy for me. I've loved it so much and I appreciate your kind words. Happy reading as you catch up!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2019.07.31 - 01:55PM Title: Chapter 44
Whoa. This chapter is so emotional!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's going to be up and down for a bit yet.
Reviewer: Antosha Signed Date: 2019.05.12 - 12:51AM Title: Chapter 44
Sure, Scorpius. You tell yourself that.
Author's Response: teehee!
Reviewer: DoubleDeuce Signed Date: 2019.05.11 - 10:47PM Title: Chapter 44
Ms. Juan,
I was certainly hoping for more of James and Caroline and maybe Nat and All but I am happy with this chapter. Happy with the story and very content to let you exercise your poetic license and your gifted imagination and tell the story any way you want. Thank you.
Nit Picking to maybe help you be a better writer. Maybe not?
In the mind of too many people ‘fact’ and ‘theory’ is not properly understood. They think they're interchangeable…There not. Appallingly true in physics in general and particle physicist in particular. In the recent past group of scientist concluded that 90% of our universe is missing. Somehow there is more, much more, 90% more gravity then known matter can generate. So to solve this conundrum scientist “theorized” dark matter and dark energy so now we have the void in balance. Energy and matter are in equilibrium and space is not empty anymore. The basics laws of physics do not allow for the creation of ’matter’ or ’energy’ from “nothing” so know we may or may not have dark matter, thus dark energy. ‘Conjuring’ something from nothing is just not possible. Not even Harry Potter can pull that off. I think it's fine to have magic stretch the limits of the improbable, but nope --‘Not the impossible.’
Politics. Like Religion, is best avoided in fiction unless it as a central part of the story. Please keep your political beliefs locked up in the word processor and don’t let them leak out into your thought process and certainly not into print. This country is so sadly completely divided that all you need do is hint at your beliefs and you will not only alienate half the population you just might incite the ire of the 30% of the population that is almost criminally insane. I abhor politics of any slant. It affected how I chose books for my Christmas gift list.
DDXXII
Author's Response: I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about as far as the sceince. There is a context missing that I am not seeing. Please explain further :)
Did I state political or religious opinions in this fanfiction???? I'm so confused. I mean, wizarding politics sure because that's appropriate but there is no religion so I'm completely lost.
Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2019.04.25 - 06:56PM Title: Chapter 44
This was a heartbreaking and lovely chapter. Again, stellar work. Such a hard thing to go through. Telling your children they’re in danger and opening up to the public about private and difficult trials you’ve experienced. Thank you gor another beautifully crafted chapter. Even if they didn’t know, it was apparent Scorpius was going to find comfort with Lily. Ahhh... so cute! Excited to see how you progress the story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2019.04.24 - 09:45PM Title: Chapter 44
This chapter is heart rending, painful, and delightful, all in turns. Very well done, and going in the direction I'd hoped it would, although as a huge Natalie fan, I could stand to see a bit more or her and Al. As always, I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: It ebs and flows in my head who I focus on. Some of them aren't moving a lot, so it's not as important to say what's going on, but their time will come. Thank you!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2019.04.24 - 06:36AM Title: Chapter 44
Sometimes love has a way to screw everything up...kutgw glad lily knows now and everyone is on alert....
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2019.04.22 - 10:44PM Title: Chapter 44
Homocidal maniac after Harry and his family, that's nothing. But hoboy, Pyramus and Thisbe, Romeo and Juliet, and Tony and Maria all rolled into one! Next chapter quickly please.
Author's Response: I'm so going to try, I just have to survive this week lol
