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Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed
Date: 2021.04.02 - 01:15PM
Title: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: ParadoxHoax Signed
Date: 2015.02.25 - 09:46AM
Title: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed
Date: 2015.02.07 - 12:50PM
Title: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2015.01.21 - 06:37AM
Title: Chapter 1
Ah I miss this chapter....not getting updates at all.....that's how not got hurt.....she does have a great memory but Toni's is getting put to shame in the klutz department.....kutgw
Author's Response: Yeah, I think a lot of people aren't getting updates. I think I've missed one or two. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed
Date: 2015.01.12 - 10:17AM
Title: Chapter 1
So, a new mystery! Excellent.
I really liked the way you continued the epilogue of book seven. Very good characterizations.
Does Nat (I like her) have Osteogenesis Imperfecta? Does she know she has it? Surely her parents would know.
Will they be able to help her magically? That would be nice.
Author's Response: Nat has something, and the something will come out in due course (not too long, in the first few chapters). :D I'm glad you like her. I was hoping everyone would. She's so fun and quirky to write.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed
Date: 2015.01.12 - 12:40AM
Title: Chapter 1
oh no.... Poor Nat would not experience Hogwarts Castle on a view from the boats! That is suppose to be breathtaking and all! What a wonderful OC. Muggleborn, a klutz and tiny. Bless her. Hope to hear more from her. I am so glad you seen to be writing a Next Generation nolvella which include Haryy, Ginny Ron and Hermione. Wonderful take on 19 years later.
Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you like Nat :) I have to admit to being very partial to her as well, and I know sometimes OCs are not always beloved. I wish this was going to be a novella... think three novel lengths stuck together and we might be getting close to how it will turn out *thud*
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2015.01.11 - 09:53PM
Title: Chapter 1
I am really enjoying your take on the next generation. Al, Rose and Nat seem like are going to turn out to be great friends like Harry, Ron and Hermione.
James seems like a marauder in the making (taking after his grandfather).
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! They might turn into them, but with their own twist :)
Reviewer: Marinka Signed
Date: 2015.01.09 - 08:08PM
Title: Chapter 1
Cute little girl:))sounds like three of them will become fast friends.
Harry and Ginny will be in late 30, is that right? I feel that your definition makes them older somehow, despite magical folks living longer etc.
Author's Response: Huh, I have to look at that again. I'm in my mid 30's so I thought I was describing them more like myself :) I'll check it out.
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed
Date: 2015.01.09 - 12:18AM
Title: Chapter 1
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Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed
Date: 2015.01.08 - 10:29PM
Title: Chapter 1
I'm very excited for this story! I don't know if I've read a Next Gen story that carries forward the tone and character of canon quite like this chapter does. I adore the introduction of Nat. Getting her perspective as she comes in on the middle of the story should be very interesting. She's a very Rowling-esque character. You seem to be avoiding a lot of the typical Next Gen cliches (i.e. making certain characters exact replicas of their parents...the family resemblances are there of course, but the kids are their own people). Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Oh good, that's partially what I'm going for. I have an idea in my head of how the characters are different from their parents, themselves if you will. :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2015.01.08 - 07:25PM
Title: Chapter 1
Interesting development. Harry has a secret? I wonder if it has to do with his relatives and the way they treated him. I like Nat - she seems like a good friend for them. Thanks for not having Scorpius show up and blend in immediately and have one of the Potter-Weasleys fall for him.
Author's Response: LOL is that a theme with Scorpius? I haven't read all that many stories of late. He does appear in the next chapter ;) I am NOT hooking Scorpius up with Rose, though. That did seem like it was too easy from the DH epilogue.
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