Reviews For Strangers at Drakeshaugh
Reviewer: NoTagBacks Signed Date: 2018.09.10 - 06:34PM Title: Biker Girls You were able to make a "serious" pun without involving Sirius Black. I'm very impressed. Serious vs. serious is a much overused fanfiction element. Your usage avoided the easy and typical (and boring). Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2018.06.30 - 11:06PM Title: Biker Girls Another great chapter. I enjoyed the scene at the gibbet calling back to Hunters & Prey. Glad Ginny shared Harry’s stay there and Jaqs mentioning seeing ghosts. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 04:04PM Title: Biker Girls Never get in the way of an idea and Ginny pulling it off...as for jac she needs to grow a pair around mike and show him more responsibilities with the kids....kutgw Reviewer: mcepl Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 03:08PM Title: Biker Girls It is surprising to me how little I care about this chapter. I understand your tendency to prolong our waiting for the happy end (or whatever end, whatever conclusion you prepared), but there is a difference between heroes struggling against the odds to achieve it and heroes doing nothing. Really, we had chapter 34 where not much happened until to the very end of the chapter (aside from Jacquie and Ginny getting drunk, and Ron getting a girl debraed ;)), chapter 35 which distracted us from the main story, chapter 36 where nothing much happened again (just clean up after the end of the chapter 34), and now we have another chapter where not much happened in terms of the story development. I haven't expected to say it about any of your works, but this starts to be mildly boring. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 10:00AM Title: Biker Girls Jacqui and Ginny's friendship is so well done. Ginny seems to be relaxing and letting Jacqui in a bit more. I loved the vision of Kingsley in a three piece suit, standing in mud, and pushing a child on a swing. Jacqui would be so mortified if she had any idea who he was! It feels like Harry and Ginny are finally settling into their new life, which is great, except that means the story will end soon - not great! Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 02:54AM Title: Biker Girls I shouldn't be lazy and write on the tablet. I know it "corrects" everything into Portuguese. I have written you make me want to go to your part of the world and it has corrected it to "vê vê". And it is particularly, not particulares. Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 02:54AM Title: Biker Girls I shouldn't be lazy and write on the tablet. I know it "corrects" everything into Portuguese. I have written you make me want to go to your part of the world and it has corrected it to "vê vê". And it is particularly, not particulares. Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 02:45AM Title: Biker Girls Delightful. Swing King is a lovely man, helping the Potters with the children. And the girls' ride is just something we enjoy with them. You just make me want vê vê your apart of the world, although it wouldn't be easy to go, particulares not on a bike ride. Reviewer: rbrt_emmer Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 02:05AM Title: Biker Girls absolutely lovely chapter my friend. I must admit, I'll be sad when this story actually does reach an ending now. On the one hand, yay, resolution! on the other I've been reading it for nearly 8 years. It'll be weird to know that there is no more wait. Reviewer: fi103r Signed Date: 2018.06.28 - 04:34PM Title: Biker Girls Excellent, Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.06.28 - 11:23AM Title: Biker Girls I think my favorite part of this is Jacqui telling Ginny she is sheltered. If only she knew! Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.06.28 - 07:20AM Title: Biker Girls How much more is there for this story? Visited cragside last year. Interesting chap, William Armstrong. Keep writing. Pure entertainment! | |||||||
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