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Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 04:34PM Title: First Quarter
Another fun day with the Carltons. It sounds like Ginny made a little slip at the end, though? I wonder if anyone noticed? Can't wait for the next update to find out. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. Another fun day. Did Jacqui notice? She doesn't miss much. I'm hoping to get back to monthly updates if I can, so you should find out soon(ish). -N-
Reviewer: tjshelton Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 04:11PM Title: First Quarter
Oops - Looks like Ginny left us with a bit of a cliffy? It'll be interesting to see how she explains the slip...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Explaining that slip will, I think, be easy, They need to leave in an hour, that's what she meant, honest. -N-
Reviewer: sabradan Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 03:01PM Title: First Quarter
hahahahaha...oops!
Author's Response: And things were going so well, too. -N-
Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 02:43PM Title: First Quarter
Yay! A new chapter--an almost Boxing Day present! Loved ‘Tease and martyr.' And that was an abrupt end to the chapter--one hour until the conference starts in Sweden. I can read the back-peddle in my mind already, "I mean their flight (or ferry) leaves in an hour."
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There was no chance that you'd see this before Christmas, but I'm indebted to Amelie for the fast turnaround at what is a busy time of year for all of us. I'm glad that you can read tthe back-peddle. -N-
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 12:33PM Title: First Quarter
Fast trip to Sweden. Oops!
Author's Response: Oops indeed. -N-
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 12:33PM Title: First Quarter
A great chapter! I love how the Muggles reacted to all of the Potters and their various family members. Overall it seems they are being rather well accepted - Mary excepted, but there's always one, isn't there? It's nice for Ginny to have a friend so different from those she grew up with. I loved the last line - I can imagine how Jacqui will be turning that phrase upside down trying to figure out how Luna and Rolf can get to Sweden in an hour! Always happy to see a new chapter from you :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
Yes, it certainly seems like the Potters made a good impression. Jacqui and Ginny have a lot in common, well, at least they're both mums of young kids, and in many ways, that IS a lot.And yes, Ginny made a slip up!
-N-
Reviewer: Silas Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 10:33AM Title: First Quarter
Wonderful as always. The fireworks should prove... interesting. I know from experience that a Guy Fawkes birthday can be lots of fun, though it is always rather cold. What can we expect next?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I decided that Henry was very close in age to James (there's only a month in it, and I gave him a Guy Fawkes birthday by accident. Next, coffee at Drakeshaugh, and after that we're leaving Jacqui for a Chapter which will revolve around Harry. -N-
Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2012.12.27 - 10:25AM Title: First Quarter
I like the depth you're achieving in the simplicity of this story. Quite well done...
Author's Response: Thank you. Things are beginning to get a bit moe complicated. -N-
