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Reviewer: firsttenormtv Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 09:55AM Title: A Breakdown, a Bike and a Barmy Blonde Again

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Any story with a well written Luna is a winner in my book and yours is exceptional! Coupled with realistic and great narrator and an intriguing plot this story can"t get much better. In my opinion this is the best written post-Hogwarts/Pre-Epiloge story out there. So many stories have Harry and Ginny steeped in the magical community after Hogwarts but it seems much more realistic, to me, that they would want to move a bit away from it all and start something on their own. Drakeshaugh is just the place.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Luna (probably) won’t be in the next chapter (my plans are changing, again), but she will be back. Almost all of my stories fit into the post-Hogwarts/pre-epilogue period. My decision to move Harry (and Ginny) into the Muggle world started with Grave Days, and the drift has continued from that story.
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Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 09:29AM Title: A Breakdown, a Bike and a Barmy Blonde Again

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re: typo: "I blew my nose and wiped my rears on his handkerchief, "

Loved seeing Harry in rescue mode, and Luna with Mary was just classic!

As always, eagerly awaiting more...

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know. It’s fixed. The worst typos are those which the spellchecker can’t catch.
Harry was in full rescue mode. Next will be good old fashioned Ron/Hermione & Harry Ginny.
-N-



Reviewer: Birlan Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 09:24AM Title: A Breakdown, a Bike and a Barmy Blonde Again

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another great chapter. luna v mary was very well done

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-



Reviewer: lamhaat shaw Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 09:12AM Title: A Breakdown, a Bike and a Barmy Blonde Again

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great story! can't wait for the next installment..... make it as fast as possible. please!

really liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Updates are monthly, possibly four weekly, I can’t work any faster than that, sorry. -N-



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2012.02.26 - 08:27AM Title: A Breakdown, a Bike and a Barmy Blonde Again

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Great update today! As a rider myself, I enjoyed reading about Harry giving Jacqui a ride. It sounds like the Potters are having all sorts of good influences on Jacqui and her family! Also, you had me laughing out loud at the conversation between Luna and Mary! Keep up the good work, I can't wait for your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
As a rider you’ll appreciate the huge difference between a good pillion and a bad one. Harry and Ginny are certainly bringing Jacqui out of her shell. Mary won’t try it on with Luna again.
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Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2012.02.23 - 12:32PM Title: A Breakdown, a Bike and a Barmy Blonde Again

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I love Luna! Another great chapter that had me chomping at the bit for the next one.

A few fun typos in the pre-validated state but that certainly doesn't affect your marks.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm impressed that you managed to review the chapter before it was approved.
I've looked for typos, not sure if I've caught them all, but if not, I can fix them later (if you let me know what and where.
More soon(ish) -N-




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