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Reviewer: English Muffin Signed Date: 2013.06.26 - 09:53AM Title: The Brokenhearted Resolve

So am I correct in assuming you are following movie canon and not book canon? This is a very well done story. I normally dislike first person perspective, but you have pulled it off. I really like the idea of the memoirs.

I have noticed a few idiomatic errors, as well as a few ongoing errors. Miss, ie Miss Weasley, does not need a period after it. Instead of running rampage, it should probably be rampant. Few and far (leave out in) between. Pining away instead of pinning (in this chapter you got it right, but in a previous chapter, it was incorrect. I have also noticed a few run-on sentences, too.

I believe that Romilda Vane is in the year below Ginny, rather in her year.

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.03.17 - 09:40PM Title: The Brokenhearted Resolve

Oh so, so close. It would have been better for it not to have been suggested...how awful to have to say no because you were already going to the ball with someone else....but why did they leave it so long!! Because they were silly boys of course!! I'v got to say, I don't think it would have been the night of Ginny's dreams if she had gone with Harry...I think it would actually been very disappointing...I don't think she would have had the night dancing away with him...at best she might have got some conversation...lol!

Poor Ginny...there is nothing worse, nothing more internally destroying to see the object of your dreams hanker after someone else....Merlin...that has to be the pits...:(

Author's Response: Been there, done that, it truly is the worst!~

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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.13 - 03:00PM Title: The Brokenhearted Resolve

No Review

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Reviewer: Gin-Gin Signed Date: 2011.08.24 - 03:26PM Title: The Brokenhearted Resolve

so touching!!!! The best chapter yet!

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