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Reviewer: mamu2 Signed Date: 2011.01.06 - 03:27PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

No 12 year old child talks like that. Everyone should be very suspicious of Harry at this point.



Reviewer: Sakabatou Signed Date: 2007.05.09 - 04:53PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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I gotta say this now, because I'll forget it and not review, but I liked this line. 'He’d been eying a beetle crawling through the dirt with some suspicion. Fortunately, it didn’t have any unusual markings around its eyes.' lol Harry's looking out for Skeeter:)



Reviewer: saz j Signed Date: 2007.05.09 - 07:30AM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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woa, intense or what?



Reviewer: NaruKoibito Signed Date: 2007.04.07 - 02:19AM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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Whew. You must really not like Dumbledore. I do love Harry's fiercefullness for the sake of Sirius though. Poor guy trapped there for so long... Anyway, good job.



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2007.03.23 - 02:58PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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That was.....powerfull...



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.07.22 - 02:26PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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What another great chapter, I love the panck that Ginny done to Percy... he got what he disveahs (Sorry bad at spelling) I like it that the Weasleys are now looking after Harry, keep up the good work.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.06.08 - 01:07AM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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Well, I came back to read and realized that I somehow didn’t leave a review as this was the last chapter I read. Odd, as I’m a dedicated reviewer. Oh well. Well, it was good for me to review this chapter to get my head back into the story. It still breaks my heart to see Harry have to go toe to toe with Dumbledore. I understand why, but Dumbledore really does try to do what’s right. He just makes mistakes like the rest of us, but since so many people depend on him to make the right decisions, his failures have more dire consequences. I really am looking forward to Harry seeing Sirius again. Sigh. I love Sirius and am still grieving his death. So, are things going to get weird for Harry and Ginny as they get older and want to date? I realize the Weasleys haven’t adopted Harry, but now he really is her surrogate brother. Some would consider that incestuous or at least a bit oogey. Me, I’m not fussed considering who they are, but I just wondered how the Molly and the Weasley men might react. I hate it that Molly made Ginny feel bad about Harry’s generosity and friendship, but at least things are clear between them. The rest will get it eventually. The best part, of course, was seeing Harry stick it to Malfoy, first with ditching Bendricks and then by his remarks about Draco being indirectly responsible for the troll incident and implying the same with the doxies. Bravo, Harry! Great chapter!



Reviewer: bookaholic_au Anonymous Date: 2005.12.20 - 01:42AM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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I must say that I am very glad that Harry isn't Ginny's brother! It would ruin a large part of the undercurrent in this story. It is interesting the way you included a bit of physic-like stuff at the begining. I think that it adds to the believability, (which isn't actually a word, but which I am taking to mean the way that it fits in with the HP universe and could conceivibly happen there). I also find it interesting because it seems to hypothesis on how all subjects, (phisics, chemistry, magic ect.) are linked. This can be seen throughout history in the rennassance and alchemy, particulary. Sorry, I'm rambling. Good luck (although I am sure that you won't need it) on the continuing story. PLEASE keep updating regularly!

Author's Response: Yeah, I nabbed degrees in Engineering and Psychology (don't ask me why, it's a long story) so I actually enjoyed coming up with the technobabble in the prologue. Thanks for the kind words and the next installment has been submitted!



Reviewer: fayerae Anonymous Date: 2005.12.09 - 06:48PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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SO i finally got through. I was really excited with the first chapter. First year was pretty good. Harry acts out of character so much which is th epoint of the story but it is still weird. I really don't like how Harry treats Dumbledore, I think the way Harry acts in J.k's books is the basis of all the events that happen. If Dumbledore thinks Harry is some cheeky arugumentative tattle-tell there entire relationship is ruined. So even if Harry remembers there relationship as granfather- son adn then mentor- student, Dumbledore won't. I also wish Harry weren't so bossy maybe, I am not sure how to phrase it. I think he needs to be a little less touvhy feely. Remember, when Harry sets his mind to do something it gets done. I did like how you had the healer say the stuff about aurors adn post trauamtic stress. I also appreciatehow when you do make something out of character you say so and normally why. But, I think Harry is to pushy and almost upitty at the Weasley's. He has lived there before so he already knows how it is to be a Weasley. hope I wasn't to mean. I am an overly opinioniated(can't spell) person, though I try not to be. keep up the work!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

Author's Response: Nah, it's fine. Merged-Harry is not a saint, and the future war has changed him in both good and bad ways. To some extent he still blames Dumbledore for how everything was destroyed (he kept all the information to himself, so he's responsible for the outcome). Harry's confidence is also shot by his ultimate failure in the future timeline - yeah he killed Voldemort, but he didn't save anyone he cared about. Also, noticing that Dumbledore was using legiulimency on him was a nasty shock to Harry. And yes, Harry is pushing the Weasleys a little more than he did in canon, but he's also stressing about all the things that have to get done before it's too late. (Thus the two conditions for guardianship, etc...) From his perspective, he'd rather see them annoyed at him than dead again. Of course, Harry has all the subtlety of a rhinocerous when he's upset.



Reviewer: Ginnykins Anonymous Date: 2005.12.08 - 11:33AM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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This is another story I just can't stop reading! It has me right on the edge of the chair quite literally! Promise that you'll update this soon! I am waiting excitedly for the conclusion!

Author's Response: New chapter is posted now, just waiting for admins to pass it.



Reviewer: Nate Anonymous Date: 2005.12.03 - 12:36AM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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This is really one of the best post-HBP stories that I've found to date. You really do a great job with the characters and everything else. Updates have been really fast too, so keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thank you! New chapter should be visible soon...



Reviewer: Tith Anonymous Date: 2005.12.02 - 08:40AM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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Great chapter, i will definetly continue on reading....can't wait till he returns to school

Author's Response: I'm working on the return to Hogwarts now...



Reviewer: Melian Anonymous Date: 2005.12.01 - 10:10PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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Really enjoying this story! One of the only post-HBP fics I've opted to read!

Author's Response: Thanks, tried to make this more than just a scavenger hunt, like a lot I have read...



Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2005.12.01 - 05:21PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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OMG! That was a great prank Ginny played on Percy! LMAO! Well, I think the next best place for Harry would have probably been the Diggory's, at least he would have been really close to the Weasleys anyway. I love the way he told off the Malfoys at the hearing. Keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: Yeah, the Diggory's would have been preferable to the Malfoys... but staying at The Burrow also gives him an excuse to upgrade the defenses there.



Reviewer: Michelle Anonymous Date: 2005.11.30 - 11:29PM Title: Birthdays and Court Days

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Awesome, awesome, awesome

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you!




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