Reviews For Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past
Reviewer: drose95 Signed Date: 2008.10.30 - 08:19AM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses No Review Reviewer: EnFuego Signed Date: 2007.08.17 - 04:43AM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses I am addicted. Please keep writing and updating (and hopefully finishing soon). This story is both haunting and satisfying. I must admit that I consider the implications regarding "older" Ginny's end are a bit much, but apart from that this story is marvelous. Long live the Gryffindor Six! Also, I personally would like closure sooner rather than later, so I do hope you're not planning on maintaining this pace for the fully seven year (or longer) arc. That would be unbearable! Keep up the great work. Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.08.06 - 08:27PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses he already got himself involved that little pain in the butt! oooh im soo glad that harry and them came up with a good prank and good for neville for defending luna and his friends! ooooh i love this update soon! please! Reviewer: kathily Signed Date: 2007.07.28 - 05:00PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses This story is outstanding! It makes me laugh and draws me in so much that I have to check it everyday! I love the plot you're unwinding. I can't wait untill the next chapter! Keep writing! Reviewer: Fleury Signed Date: 2007.07.12 - 12:58AM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Excellent chapter! I don't know if I've reviewed this at all, but I've been following the fic for a very long time -- although I lost track of it for a while between March and June. I must say, I'm very impressed with your britpickers. I may not be British, but I've got a childhood friend who's British, and I learned a lot from her. There are discrepancies here and there, but it may just be my overtired mind. If not, what are a few tiny mistakes? :P Your writing is also very impressive -- the fic is obviously well-researched, you've got great ideas that have made me think on the books more than I have in years, and your grammatical errors are basically nonexistent (there's no such thing as no grammatical errors, which I wish wasn't the case). All in all, you've created a wonderful fic -- one that I look forward to eventually finishing. Reviewer: Ginnykins Anonymous Date: 2007.07.09 - 06:02PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses I love the way you quoted Spiderman when Dumbledore says, " With great power comes great responsibility!". You wouldn't be a Spiderman fan by any chance would you? I love Spiderman too! Reviewer: ohhhdear Signed Date: 2007.06.30 - 01:54PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Hope you're summer's going well, and your Muse tickles you with some inspiration to finish this opus. Congratulations on the Silver Trinket award, btw... well done! Reviewer: spiderron Signed Date: 2007.06.29 - 03:28PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Your story is ok, though it seems to get more unrealistic the further you take it. My only complaint is that you portray Harry just as JKR does, which means he only thinks he makes the right decisions. He has no faith in others decisions (he did such a bang up job the first time). In all the HP books, much trouble could probably have been avoided if Harry would have just discussed the matters with Dumbledore before hand. Your character is at least consistent with hers. I think the anger you have Harry show Dumbledore is a little unrealistic. I would envision that a Harry that came back in time would be a little more understanding of Dumbledore's good intentions, instead you have your character showing utter contempt which I find hard to believe. You have him hating Dumbledore as much as Snape which is unbelievable. The other thing is, why wouldn't they just destroy Voldemorts ability to get his body back? Why not destroy all the Horcruxes before he can regain his body? I know you have had Sirius out looking for some of them but you don't address that topic much at all. Reviewer: JPotterNY Signed Date: 2007.06.16 - 05:52PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Keep up the good work! After browsing a few reviews I can't think of much they haven't covered already. Reviewer: Flavia Signed Date: 2007.05.18 - 01:56AM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Incredibly fabulous as always. Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2007.05.16 - 07:15PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses No Review Reviewer: SueP Signed Date: 2007.05.14 - 01:30PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses One can always count on you to deliver an amazing chapter. I think your detail and flow is getting better and better. The description of Harry's bogart was heart wrenching - I believe I stopped breathing for a few seconds I was so engrossed in what he was seeing. I love the conversations you have between the six, there's a fierce loyalty building that's better than cannon. You got a smile from me when Harry asked Ginny if she'd made a list yet for his trip to Hogsmeade. Very cute interactions, blending the boy with his future's interest. I'm a glutton for the fluffy stuff but the kids are 12 and 13 in your timeline so I guess I have to wait. There were so many hints of things that might mean more - what was the significance of Neville's apology? What was that spell Harry used to defeat Reviewer: hjp74 Signed Date: 2007.05.12 - 03:09PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses wow i was expecting something pretty intense to open this chapter up with but even i didnt expaect you to push harry so far (of course if that curse whateverr it was works agenst the real dementors as a boogart things could be intresting later on in the year). Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2007.05.10 - 11:44PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses It's nice to see another chapter in this story. Thanks for sharing! Reviewer: QuietFlight Signed Date: 2007.05.09 - 08:14PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses spectacular...and riviting.....your story ideas are amazing and the way its written, well it feels like im reading a published best seller novel... Reviewer: Chatmandu Signed Date: 2007.05.09 - 03:51PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Oh yes, something else just ocurred to me. Professor Addams? Her first name wouldn't be Wednesday, would it? She would be about the right age! Reviewer: gryffindorchaser17 Signed Date: 2007.05.09 - 12:33AM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Congrats on another great chapter man. I'm really enjoying your story. Though I doubt you are, don't let people get you down because your ideas differ from their own. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Reviewer: pigwidgeon Signed Date: 2007.05.08 - 10:44PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses I've just spent the last three weeks rereading this story (at work), so it was such a nice surprise to find an update just when I've reached the end. Perfect timing. Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2007.05.08 - 10:09PM Title: Chapter 33: Destructive Impulses Another fabulous chapter. I'd wait forever for this story if you'd just promise me you'll eventually finish it. I'm not going to ask you to update because I believe the best chapters take time. Update when you're able to. | |||||||
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