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Reviewer: Hawk29 Signed Date: 2014.01.21 - 04:55PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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The understated confrontation between Ginny and Harry is really well done. Neither of them forced an awkward or emotional discussion, and it was so well done it almost speaks for itself. I remember this scene for a few years and when I think back on Harry Potter fan fiction, I remember this. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us!



Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2009.10.16 - 02:07AM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Well, like I said in an earlier chapter, I'm re-reading this story. So now, I have another question. I think its safe to assume that Draco will finish his education at Durmstrung since its where his father had wanted him to go in the first place. Will Draco be making an appearance during fourth year for the Tri-Wizard Tournement, if he is indeed attending Durmstrung. Also (and this is just for curiosities sake) what ever became of Draco in the original timeline? Have you ever thought along that path or should we just assume he was killed at some point in the war? Great story. ~Jeff~



Reviewer: Ginnykins Anonymous Date: 2007.07.02 - 11:36AM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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I love tha Harry was finally able to tell everyone what he did and how his magic is very advanced for a 12 year old! I also love the fact that Snape left or was sacked? Brilliant story!



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2006.11.18 - 08:19PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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um question? again im reading this chapter again and just realizing some things. i dont understand about lucius malfoy. i thought he was in prision or at least under close watch by the ministry. how can he still have all that influence with the board of governs if all that stuff with dark magic happened during christmas? just a thought?

Author's Response: The same way he stayed out of Azkaban after Voldemort disappeared - liberal expenditures of money and political influence. Remember the threats he made against the board of governors in the canon timeline...



Reviewer: Rynfish Signed Date: 2006.09.14 - 11:47AM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Brilliant! Another great chapter, I really cant discribe how much im loving this story, and its really interesting now. heres what i see:

1) now that snapes gone, will Remus still be able to teach next year as snape wont be able to brew the wolfsbane, although now i think about it, Slughorn will, but he will have to find out about remus' "furry little problem"

2) Why will the dementors be there if dumbledore now knows sirius will not be looking for harry?

3)If snape does not reveal remus is a lycan, will he still be the DATDA teacher in year 4?

Man im looking foward to next year so much, especially since PoA is my favourate cannon book

Keep up the good work, you "Nasty Yank" lol



Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.02 - 08:34PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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I've finally finished chapter 27, and I have to say that I love the way that the story is going, I'm sorry that I didn't reviewed since the Chapter called Interlude with Molly, but I have to say that since then its becoming a very great story, some of the ideas I wouldn't have thought of.

I love the way you wrote all the characters, its just like the book characters, but better... which I like. they become better people too. As they become stronger then before and better firends.

So anyhow I ahve to go now and read Chapter 28, which I will review... so keep up the great work, as you're doing a great job in the story.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.07.03 - 05:37AM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Oh WOW! So much happened in this chapter. Malfoy and Snape gone with Dobby freed to boot! I’m curious about Snape’s departure. In normal circumstances, he’d certainly be fired. Still, as far as we know, Dumbledore still thinks he’s reformed. I’m curious as to why Dumbledore would want to relinquish his potential spy who he has always defended. My guess is that, reformed or not, Snape had been complicit in an attack on a student, so there’s no way he could allow him to stay or make excuses for him. That certainly throws many things on its head. Yes, the timeline is certainly toast. I’m now very curious how long until Harry fills Dumbledore in. Now, after such a difficult day, Harry had no nightmares. Is that because he was so tired, or have they been (mostly) eradicated by the acceptance of his friends? Since the next year’s story will have a new name, I wonder if that’s an indication that Harry is beginning to move beyond the nightmares just as the timeline is lost and can begin to focus more on his younger self. So much to ponder there. As for Harry’s friends, I was pretty sure that everyone would forgive any manipulation and deception when they understood why he’d done it, what he’d been through, and that he was trying to save them. Luna hit it right on the head. I don’t know if there might be some residual fallout, but I’m very pleased that thus far everyone is reacting how I’d hoped. As for the talk with Ginny, well, I’m sorry she was jealous of Cho even for a minute, but it’s not a surprise. I’m glad she had the courage to ask Harry about their status. Her positive if concise response had to lift a massive weight from Harry. Interesting that you didn’t really explore Harry’s emotions at that and just let the walk off together deciding that maybe this would be ok. Well played indeed, This chapter did not let up for a second. It was full of suspense, action, and juicy revelations, so it was a very worthy climax. Bravo!



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.29 - 09:08AM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

You went and got a job didn't you. Will we hear from you anymore?



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.28 - 12:33PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.26 - 10:55PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Reviewer: gryfangel Anonymous Date: 2006.06.22 - 10:52AM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Great chapter - loved the action! Update soon....please!



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 06:56PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 04:18PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Reviewer: MischiefManaged Signed Date: 2006.06.20 - 05:36PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

I love this story so much!I'm not tat into back-in-time stories because it just seems like you know everything that's going to happen(beaause you do). But this story is new and different and fantastic! I hope you update ASAP! Because I need to read more. And I totally hope that they akll ask Harry questions because I want to know how they take it. And Ginny better love him still, because it would be awful if she ddin't! Anyway I love this story adn update soon!



Reviewer: MischiefManaged Signed Date: 2006.06.20 - 05:36PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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I love this story so much!I'm not tat into back-in-time stories because it just seems like you know everything that's going to happen(beaause you do). But this story is new and different and fantastic! I hope you update ASAP! Because I need to read more. And I totally hope that they akll ask Harry questions because I want to know how they take it. And Ginny better love him still, because it would be awful if she ddin't! Anyway I love this story adn update soon!



Reviewer: Silverwolfsm Signed Date: 2006.06.18 - 11:12PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Thank you for a very entertaining story so far. I have enjoyed every bit of it. I love AU stories, especially ones about some form of time travel. I also love the way you wrap so of the main situatuons from the actual books into your story. Having just found this site recently and your story just the other day,

Thank you for your time and effort to bring us this wonderful story.

Silverwolfsm.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.16 - 08:14AM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

update PLEASE!!!



Reviewer: SueP Signed Date: 2006.06.14 - 01:21PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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So now you've won an award. So now do you believe we are all waiting, some of us impatiently, for your next chapter. I love your story. I'm really looking forward to seeing how you play out the idea that the fab. five now know Harry's got memories from the future. I liked the ending of this chapter very much.



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.06.13 - 04:23PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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This story is fantastic! I just read it upto here. This on of, the BEST on siye, You are we read and execute the story well. Sacking Snape and Malfoy was BRILL.



Reviewer: nennius Signed Date: 2006.06.12 - 08:28PM Title: All Hell Breaks Loose!

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Ordinarily when you find a really good story line for a Harry Potter fiction it is ruined with badly writtten drivel. When you do find a well-written story it's normally a plot that has been done a million times and you're bored to death reading it. To find a story that is fresh, intriguing, and extremely well written at the same time is something of an oddity. Thanks for being unusual.




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