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Reviewer: drose95 Signed Date: 2008.11.06 - 12:08AM Title: Mistletoe and Misshapen Musical Messengers
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Reviewer: Ginnykins Anonymous Date: 2007.06.29 - 12:03PM Title: Mistletoe and Misshapen Musical Messengers
Love the return prank Harry and Ginny played on Fred and George. Great! I also like the fact that Harry has been able to overlook the prejudicial feeling towards Slytherins to befriend Millicent.
Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.07.27 - 09:38AM Title: Mistletoe and Misshapen Musical Messengers
I wonder what ever happened to Percy, to go againest his family?? You're doing a great job in writing your story.
I wished that Professor McGonagall give Harry permission to duel Draco, I would love to read that.
Keep up the good worrk...
Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.07.03 - 03:07AM Title: Mistletoe and Misshapen Musical Messengers
Watching Harry handle the twins (or George in this case) is amusing. I got a kick out of them flirting with Hermione (their little cheating battle was priceless) although Harry is right that it could cause serious problems. Remarking on their joke shop though – brilliant! That will keep them guessing. Harry kissing Ginny on the forehead was so bittersweet – the way he squeezed her shoulders to try to convey emotion to her that she can’t truly understand at this point and that he can’t act on until he can tell her the truth. Poignant moment. What you’re doing with Percy is very interesting. He and Harry both made oaths, so let’s see how this changes things for them down the line. His taking care of Malfoy and Harry’s verbal reinforcement of that act seemed like a good start. The memory of Hermione’s death was excruciating, one of the worst we’ve seen so far. Harry and Ginny’s revenge on the twins had me literally chortling. While I laugh loudly often, I rarely chortle, so kudos to you.
Best quip of the chapter has to go to Harry for: “Come on, Harry,” Sirius cajoled. “What’s life without a little risk?” “Longer,” Harry replied, deadpan.
Brilliant writing, brilliant story!
Reviewer: Flavia Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 03:27AM Title: Mistletoe and Misshapen Musical Messengers
I am glad you have a job, even if it does take away from your updating this fabulous story. As to more in-depth reviews, I have to say that I honestly cannot come up with any criticisim other than what I have in a preivous review: that I think you have Snape wrong, according to Canon. But you can't very well change him now, can you? When I praise the story I am also not long winded, because who wants to gush like a teeny bopper? As a reader, I hate to see fawning reviews for less well-written stories, as it takes away from the praise writers like you deserve. But I still like to drop a word of praise whnever I read an update, because I am thrilled when you do it, and definitely want you to continue.
Author's Response: Well, I think *this* Snape has been altered by the changes in Harry. He still resents the hell out of him for James et al, but merged-Harry isn't taking any crap from him this time around. Add in the fact that he *doesn't* have access to Harry's mind to play with like he did in canon. Also Harry is less obviously miserable and maneuvering/manipulating things far better than in the original timeline. Put all those things together, and you get a much angrier, less controlled, less sympathetic Snape. And maybe Severus suspects something as well...
Reviewer: Flavia Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 03:03AM Title: Mistletoe and Misshapen Musical Messengers
You are just BRILLIANT
Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Signed Date: 2006.04.28 - 12:04AM Title: Mistletoe and Misshapen Musical Messengers
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