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Reviewer: Lord Jawblinneron Signed Date: 2011.06.03 - 11:34PM Title: Difficult Decisions

Put this in the previous chapter by accident so re-posting it in the correct chapter:
Was hoping for either an engagement ring while Harry was at the jewelers or at least Harry asking Arthur for Ginny's hand in marriage, but alas nothing happened in that department. I am really enjoying the Ron/Hermione drama was starting to think you matured Ron too fast and too much.

Will

Author's Response: The romances will develop each in their own time - patience!! And Ron's maturing because it's about time he did - Harry and Hermione both need him to grow up, and for his own good, Ron does too. Glad you're enjoying it! Abraxan



Reviewer: Generic Euphoria Signed Date: 2010.10.17 - 07:05PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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This late development is incredibly disappointing. You've put Ginny through a near-rape experience, and you have absolutely no understanding of how women deal with the true experience. Not that I do, but it's clear you don't either. Look at your plot line; Ginny near-raped in one chapter. The next chapter, we've gone by and now we're dealing with some stupid, shallow mistake of Hermione's?

You went from something truly traumatic, something that had real promise as a mini-arc in your story, and you drop it for some superficial mistake of Hermione's. The emotional trauma of everyone involved could have made for a good story. That's the only reason anybody should ever write about something like that. It really puts into question your character; who writes about stuff like that without a true purpose?

Not to mention the reactions of everybody else about this; mild, to say the least. God.. that was probably the worst bit of writing I've ever seen, and I've seen some doozies. I've decided to ignore Chapter 8 and anything related in future chapters. Ginny was captured, and then rescued, nothing else happened. Why? Because there's absolutely nothing of value that chapter adds to the story, so I'm ignoring your pathetic excuse for a supporting plot line.

I'm not some young boy, intent on a world split in "good and evil", but I also think that was a poor piece of writing on your part. I'm annoyed that you may have ruined your story for me with that.

Oh well, rating? Troll, no doubt about it.



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.05 - 11:51PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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oh dear...i really hope Ron and Hermione sort this out....and next time it needs to be Ron who messes up no Hermione too much as happened with her...its just not fair! unless your doing this on purpose because you don't like Hermione which is possible! well argg! great chapter!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: LOL! You'll just have to keep reading to see what happens! Glad you enjoyed it!



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2006.07.10 - 10:08AM Title: Difficult Decisions

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Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.06.21 - 09:56PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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God Harry is so sweet he loves Ginny so much he'd do just about anything to protect her. And Arthur thank god he talked Harry out of breaking up with Ginny, that would have been a huge mistake. As her Hermione she made a stupid mistake going for an older guy. How would she feel if Ron did that to her. She'd hex him into next week.

Author's Response: It's just a sign that Hermione still has some maturing to do (as does Ron, as does their relationship) that she "wandered" here. And yes, Harry IS so sweet and just adores Ginny, lucky girl! Fortunately for both of them, Arthur is a very wise man. Glad you're enjoying this! Abraxan



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.05.12 - 05:31PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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oh boy oh boy oh boy.

Author's Response: LOL! Now I'll have to re-read the chapter to see what got you so excited! heehee Abraxan



Reviewer: asad_asif_86 Signed Date: 2006.04.03 - 11:21AM Title: Difficult Decisions

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Reviewer: xo_morgie33 Signed Date: 2006.03.23 - 10:29PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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I'm still mad at Hermione. I hope I'll egt over it. I'm also still SOOO sad for Gin! *cry*

Author's Response: You'll get over it, don't worry! :-) Abraxan



Reviewer: Katie27 Signed Date: 2006.03.17 - 06:32PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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I am going to stop reading for today. I have been reading this for a total of, er, five hours I think. I haven't gotten very far though, only six chapters. I am so not used to this...only used to reading books straight through in a few hours! Lol...anyway...excellent! I love that the chapters are still as long as ever and that six of them were about the summer, my favorite parts!!!!!! Everything seems to flow so nicely...something I have trouble with sometimes. I just love you style so much. I was surprised to read that you had practically finished writng this one when HBP was released. Very surprised! It seems as though so has been in these that was in the book (spells and the like). Brilliant job! Superb! I will read more tomorrow...the weekend has begun and it is Friday night....I need to do something besides read (no offense meant!). Once again, terrific writing! -Katie

Author's Response: I seriously did have this fic nearly complete before HBP was published. I just "guessed well" what JKR might do, based on things she'd established in the previous books. Glad you're enjoying it! Abraxan



Reviewer: Cyborg Anonymous Date: 2006.01.10 - 11:41PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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im sorry, but i see hermione's actions in this chapter very uncanon. they were obviously crazy about each other in rf. she is too smart to throw something like this away. loved everything else though!

Author's Response: Even "real people" act out of character from time to time -- and until you find out why they're doing it, you simply can't understand how they could react that way. Just keep reading -- it's my INTENTION to keep my readers guessing! Glad you enjoyed most of the chapter! I hope you'll be pleased with the rest of the fic. Abraxan



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2005.10.31 - 04:08PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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Better but I can't believe Hermione was such a... (for lack of a better term) slut. ANyway, I'm glad fences are getting mended and hopefully the quartet will be up and going soon.

Author's Response: She didn't SLEEP with him!! She just got swept off her feet for a while! Abraxan, who knows such things DO happen in real life!



Reviewer: hg4ever Anonymous Date: 2005.10.31 - 03:51AM Title: Difficult Decisions

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Sad about hermione and ron's seperation =(, i really hope they get together..it's the author's decision *threatens* lol just jk! Then again, it was sorta also Hermione's fault of it all, as she wanted 'bigger better' things and her living-the-muggle-way from her parents. *sigh* Still, true loves have to stick together = lol... I hope there's fluffiness once again XD!! Fluff All Ze Way~!

Author's Response: There's plenty of fluff on the way!!! Abraxan



Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Date: 2005.10.30 - 04:33PM Title: Difficult Decisions

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omg, ur chapters are so long but also very good! i love both ur stories! how do u manage to write such long chapters! lol update soon.

Author's Response: The story has just become so complex, the chapters are writing themselves at 30-55 pages long for the most part throughout Destiny. Glad you're enjoying it! Abraxan



Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous Date: 2005.10.30 - 10:47AM Title: Difficult Decisions

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As always I love it!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Abraxan




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