Reviews For The Time of Destiny
Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.10.20 - 04:48AM Title: Patterns i loved that whole meeting - and percy getting fired - the best part - but what is he going to do now - cos he may now turn to death eaters, if he feels he has nowhere else to go! Reviewer: deejinator Signed Date: 2008.08.27 - 01:03AM Title: Patterns It warmed my heart to see Percy get his come-upance. That is one aspect of the Cannon books that I did not like. Good job. Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.13 - 04:08PM Title: Patterns aww man i wish that percy would just listen! arggg...i wonder if he's under the imperious! but whatever! great chapter! Reviewer: JohnniePolo Signed Date: 2006.03.26 - 10:33AM Title: Patterns obstreperous??? Awesome word! Reviewer: jaybird Anonymous Date: 2006.01.15 - 11:45PM Title: Patterns Great!!!!
keep the chps comin!!!!!!! Reviewer: cyborg Anonymous Date: 2006.01.14 - 10:53PM Title: Patterns great stuff... i almost wish you actually thought up harry potter and wrote the series your way because i enjoy your stories so much! keep it up. Reviewer: Renee Anonymous Date: 2006.01.08 - 08:16PM Title: Patterns I am enjoying your story so much! I had read The Refiner's Fire before this and it was completely awesome! Your work is flawless. :) I thought at first you were done with this story but I figured you were going to be adding more to The Time of Destiny because it didn't seem to be finished but I wasn't sure. :) I can't wait to read your next chapter(s), I'm so excited! Keep up the fantastic work! Reviewer: Vladius Anonymous Date: 2006.01.07 - 01:16PM Title: Patterns errrr.....sry for my mistake..i have no ideia that you would be "Mrs" Abraxan instead of "Mr" Abraxan,im realy sry x.x...hey nice chapter again =D (its abouth the 100th time i said that? lol xD) i've loved some of its "surprises" (percy being fired? great =D) but im missing some display of afection between the couples (not snogging or something like that..just that feeling of enjoy each other company). im very curious about what would be the "final battle" =o...im expectating great things ^^ congrats again o// Reviewer: master-spellcaster Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 09:30PM Title: Patterns Hey abraxan, you are a good writer. I would love to have a London Lions jersey. That would be great. I am a major, major, major Harry Potter and Quidditch fan. The dementor capture spell is a great invention to inclue. I am writing a story as well: Harry Potter and the Du Sundavar Freohr. If it is actually posted and you see it, I would love for you to read and review it. If you see and review it, you can be as critical as you like. Include some writing tips whatever. I will not care. As I said above, would love a London Lions jersey. Reviewer: blondeshorte88 Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 08:29PM Title: Patterns Interesting chapter...another one w/o to much tragedy. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter! Reviewer: Brianne Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 08:04PM Title: Patterns Hey i love ur stories so keep writing! they're great! Reviewer: murgel Signed Date: 2006.01.04 - 03:40PM Title: Patterns HA! what a chapter! You are brilliant.
I would have liked to read more Ginny stuff but it was not meant to be.
This chapter about politics was brilliant and did perfect in staging more events and pulling the plot further.
its a full 10/10 and I would even give it special recomendations. Reviewer: odonata Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 03:36PM Title: Patterns quite impressive. one false note, though, given how you portray harry; namely, you did not give hermione the credit she deserved for the pattern wrt the mugglenappings. aside from this quibble, must say that i am eager to see the next chapter. pls write faster (even if this is why these small glitches arise). Reviewer: erin Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 03:19PM Title: Patterns Wonderful - as ever! Please keep posting asap! Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2006.01.04 - 09:49AM Title: Patterns I've said it once and I'll say it again...You just keep topping yourself. This chapter had me feeling like I was there in the middle of the "posturing and pontificating." Your descriptive talents have done the job again. I know there wasn't a lot of action to deal with here, but as you've shown, there doesn't always have to be a lot action going on for it to be a good chapter.
I can only hope that the final battle scenes matches what you you have done so far. I could hardly hope for something better...could I? Well, with the talent that you have displayed so far, I'm sure you could, and will, rise to the occasion and give something truly magnificent.
Now that I have you all buttered up, any hints as to what might be coming up? ;-) | |||||||
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