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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.04.28 - 03:41PM Title: Rescue

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Quite the battle scene. Harry was a hero rescuing Ginny, taking care of Ron, and endlessly fighting. It is a relief that Bellatrix is gone and finally unable to hurt them or anyone else.



Reviewer: hgluver4ever Signed Date: 2009.08.04 - 04:20PM Title: Rescue

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I'm glad Bellatrix is finally out of the way. She definitely deserved to die for all the pain she's caused.

I'm glad that everyone is basically okay, at least they will recover. Emotionally it will take Harry a while to come to terms with the fact he's killed Death Eaters, but they were evil and certainly deserved it. It was self-defense after all.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Abraxan



Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.04.11 - 09:52AM Title: Rescue

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Nice chapter!!!



Reviewer: harmoine Signed Date: 2008.02.23 - 07:04PM Title: Rescue

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an excellent chapter and i really enjoyed it. the battle was supurb and i liked how it turned it especially all the wandless magic and such. delighted that bella has been killed as had wormtail even though he still has a life debt to harry for which he owes. anyway keep up the fantastic work and the roll the chapters through. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! Abraxan



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.02 - 10:05PM Title: Rescue

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bloody hell! thats all i can say about that!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: heehee Abraxan



Reviewer: Paulinha Potter Signed Date: 2007.12.03 - 08:17PM Title: Rescue

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Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2007.04.03 - 08:46AM Title: Rescue

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Great chapter and a great read. Don't know if I'm into jumping off of cliff's but I guess I would if I was Harry. Well written, discriptive and well done. Regards....................

Au thor's Response: Thanks a lot! No, I wouldn't jump off a cliff either, but then again, I'm not Harry Potter! I'm glad HE did, and so is Ginny! Glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: Avalon_Maiden Anonymous Date: 2007.02.19 - 08:05PM Title: Rescue

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Whoa! Nice battle scene!

I stopped reviewing a few chapters back because I was just saying the same thing over and over again. I really loved this chapter and the chapters before this were very creative and very well written. I love how this story is turning out!


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Author's Response: Thanks bunches! Glad you're enjoying the fic, and that you liked the battle scene! Abraxan



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.05.06 - 10:38PM Title: Rescue

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that was an amazing battle, I really enjoyed it. And was very please when no order members died, nice way to kill off Bella, and I think that Harry was capable of the AK curse, you have to mean it, and with those he care about in danger; I would think he'd mean it. Nice save on Remus; I see you played up the silver hand; I enjoyed that too. Good one!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you agree with me about the AK - I think with his friends in danger, he WOULD be capable of doing it. Glad you liked the save on Remus and the silver hand bit! Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: asad_asif_86 Signed Date: 2006.04.03 - 11:13AM Title: Rescue

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Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.04.01 - 04:44AM Title: Rescue

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Enjoy the rest of his holiday? After a battle like that? Ha! This was a very exciting chapter. The fighting was engaging, and Harry saving Ginny twice was wonderful. The bit with Voldemort and the molten rock was very cool. I guess Voldie might need to rethink punishing his Death Eaters for not being able to finish off Harry since he fared pretty poorly himself. Fabulous job!

Author's Response: THanks a lot! Abraxan



Reviewer: KlosetAuthor Anonymous Date: 2006.03.26 - 02:16AM Title: Rescue

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I've been enjoying this story very thoroughly. It's extensivly long and well though out. I was dissapointed you killed Casey, I had hoped for somthing more orriginal, but the way it altered Hary's powers would have been dificult to do otherwise. I was dissapointed by your having Harry use the Killing Curse. I cannot believe that he's evil enough to do so. Everything from canon would suggest that you have to enjoy killing to do it. Remember the Curciatus curse requires not just anger or rage, but enjoying the pain of others. I would point out there are other lethal spells. A Gout of flame is easily as deadly and much easier to aim and harder to dodge. A cutting curse of sufficient power will kill anything by causing it to bleed to death. a bludgeoning curse of suficient power would pulverize a human being killing them instantly. I always thougt that the killing curse lacked creativity and was a crutch for simpleton Deatheaters that would otherwise lack any real combat power. Well Enough of My Rant. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story. Thank you for having the creativity to write a story and the courage to post it, Your Friendly Neighborhood KlosetAuthor

Author's Response: I was just building on what JKR created, and she put the AK curse there, and showed Harry TRYING to use Unforgiveables several times. Now Harry has people he really loves in his life and with them to protect, his hatred (and it is genuine hatred even in canon) for Voldemort has grown exponentially. He decided to kill Sirius when he was 13, and would have done so if he'd known how. I believe he CAN do the AK once he gets enough power and confidence, because he knows he's protecting his loved ones by killing off the bad guys who will kill him and those he loves quite cheerfully, given half the chance. Anyone can be driven to kill - yes, anyone - given the right circumstances. I do believe this. And I believe I gave Harry the right circumstances to develop this ability. JKR may go a different route - that's her perogative. And you can do what you want in your stories. This is what I felt was right for mine. Abraxan



Reviewer: KlosetAuthor Anonymous Date: 2006.03.26 - 02:13AM Title: Rescue

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I've been enjoying this story very thoroughly. It's extensivly long and well though out. I was dissapointed you killed Casey, I had hoped for somthing more orriginal, but the way it altered Hary's powers would have been dificult to do otherwise. I was dissapointed by your having Harry use the Killing Curse. I cannot believe that he's evil enough to do so. Everything from canon would suggest that you have to enjoy killing to do it. Remember the Curciatus curse requires not just anger or rage, but enjoying the pain of others. I would point out there are other lethal spells. A Gout of flame is easily as deadly and much easier to aim and harder to dodge. A cutting curse of sufficient power will kill anything by causing it to bleed to death. a bludgeoning curse of suficient power would pulverize a human being killing them instantly. I always thougt that the killing curse lacked creativity and was a crutch for simpleton Deatheaters that would otherwise lack any real combat power. Well Enough of My Rant. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story. Thank you for having the creativity to write a story and the courage to post it, Your Friendly Neighborhood KlosetAuthor



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.25 - 12:42AM Title: Rescue

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Yep another exciting chapter.



Reviewer: Moonlight51 Anonymous Date: 2005.12.07 - 12:44AM Title: Rescue

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the killing curses right out of his fingers! he didn't even need his wand! thats so awsome!! i love a powerfel man... ^.~ great chapter!!

Author's Response: THanks! Glad you liked that! Abraxan



Reviewer: The Black Tower Anonymous Date: 2005.09.27 - 07:54PM Title: Rescue

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harry is above the killing curse although not above killing in battle. There are a lot of deadly curses and harry is powerful enough that they will kill whatever they touch, break through any shield. The book said that moody always brought the death eaters in alive if he could, moody is above killing a prisoner.

Author's Response: I don't disagree with you. I had him capable of using the Unforgiveables because of how many people he had to kill, how quickly he needed to do it, and the fact taht JKR has shown him TRYING to use them in canon. He's powerful enough now to do it, and angry enough, but it won't hurt his purity of heart because he hates doing it -- he's only doing it to protect those he loves, as well as himself, and get the battle over with as quickly as possible. Abraxan



Reviewer: The Real Nymphadora Signed Date: 2005.09.26 - 12:42PM Title: Rescue

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loving this story, please keep up the great work

Author's Response: Thanks! Abraxan



Reviewer: hg4ever Anonymous Date: 2005.09.26 - 10:49AM Title: Rescue

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this story is absolutely wonderful. wow....why stop there?? 0_0 keep on writing please!

Author's Response: Refiner's is the sixth year fic. "The Time of Destiny" is the seventh year fic. I don't plan to write any HP novels after that - I'd plan to write a novel I can sell and make money on! ;-> I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Abraxan



Reviewer: erin Anonymous Date: 2005.09.25 - 04:13PM Title: Rescue

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This story just gets more and more involving! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: That's great! Thanks for writing! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Abraxan



Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2005.09.25 - 02:29PM Title: Rescue

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Excellent. I like Harry sort of coming into his own with the battle. Very powerful imagery as well as powerful Harry! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that!! Abraxan




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