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Reviewer: cvm6613 Signed Date: 2022.07.27 - 04:58AM Title: Goodbyes

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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.04.23 - 08:25PM Title: Goodbyes

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This looks rather dangerous. I know that Albus is trying to help Harry deal with his grief, but pulling out memories seems a bit extreme.

Author's Response: Dumbledore himself will admit he isn't the all-wise wonder-wizard everyone thinks he is, but in this case, he just might be doing the right thing. You'll just have to wait and see! Abraxan



Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2011.02.24 - 09:58AM Title: Goodbyes

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Very moving chapter here. As I was reading previous chapters of your story, I was wondering how you could move Casey out of the way to make room for an eventual H/G relationship (a given here on SIYE) without killing her off. Despite half expecting it, you still managed to really move me with her death and Harry's response to it. Excellent writing.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yeah, Casey was created in order for her death to have a major impact on Harry. I've had such strong reactions from readers to her death that I've used her name and character as an ongoing character (one I won't kill off) in my original novels, "Star Sons: Dawn of the Two" and "Star Sons Book 2: The Gathering Alliance" both available on Amazon. She appears late in the first book, and here and there throughout the second book, and will also be in the third book of the trilogy (which I expect to be available in 2012 or 2013). Thanks for writing! I'm glad you're enjoying my story! Abraxan



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2008.12.31 - 01:43PM Title: Goodbyes

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Reviewer: Artistand Signed Date: 2008.06.24 - 12:59AM Title: Goodbyes

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Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.04.08 - 12:42PM Title: Goodbyes

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I really loved the chapter... i dont remmber myself crying so much like this before... it was really sadning moment right from funeral uptil the end.... i think removing the memory is the best course of action now since there is too much of grief too handle for him.

Author's Response: Thanks - glad it made sense to you for the memories to be removed. Abraxan



Reviewer: harmoine Signed Date: 2008.02.14 - 08:24PM Title: Goodbyes

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this chapter was very moving and it almost brought tears to my eyes especially with regards to the funeral service of casey and her family. you did a really great job with how it was written and for the fact that harry needed this closure so that he could begin to heal from the pain and sorrow he is experiencing with her death.

its a great idea of having the penseive that dumbledore gave to harry. by the looks of things this is the way that you're going to have harry recover from the sad and tragic events of the last 2-3 chapters.

the trip to diagon alley was excellent and i found the opti-wizard to be quite enjoyable especially how hermione was able to negociate for harry to receive his glasses for free and in return he is able to get more customers. confrontation with colin creevy was also great and well handled as well. not sure if there is anything else that needs to be mentioned so i'll proceed onto the next chapter to read.

Author's Response: Yeah, Casey's funeral brought tears to my eyes a lot while I was writing it, and every time I read it. Glad you liked the chapter! Abraxan



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.01 - 08:43PM Title: Goodbyes

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thats very sad...bloody hell! this sucks (um not the story just what happened! lol)

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Author's Response: Yeah, but it kept you interested, didn't it? :) Abraxan



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.12.14 - 06:29PM Title: Goodbyes

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Reviewer: Paulinha Potter Signed Date: 2007.11.28 - 01:04PM Title: Goodbyes

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Reviewer: Avalon_Maiden Anonymous Date: 2007.02.18 - 06:40PM Title: Goodbyes

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Well that was depressing. Well-written but depressing. I can't say I liked the chapter. I'm not sure if that came out right... I'm rating it 10 but I don't /like/ it. I dunno... It was really well written and I don't know many people that can write a depressing chapter like that with all of those emotions and actually make the reader feel the emotions and feel like they were there.

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Author's Response: Wow, that's a great review! If I made you feel as if you were there, that's perfect! Thanks a lot! It wasn't supposed to be an "enjoyable" chapter - it was supposed to move you and make you feel for the characters. It sounds to me as if that's what happened here, which means it was successful! Thanks! Abraxan



Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 12:45PM Title: Goodbyes

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uh oh!!! Is all I can say to the end of that one. This is intriguing, poor Harry, so much sorrow for someone so young. I'm surprised with everything the poor boy has been through, that not once, not yet, has he completely broken, and given up. Or simple lost his mind. If I'd been through as much as him I'd have broken, gone out of my mind, and given up on life all together.

Author's Response: Harry is one of the most resilient characters I've ever read - and that makes him great fun to write! But he is human. . .keep reading! Abraxan



Reviewer: asad_asif_86 Signed Date: 2006.04.03 - 10:58AM Title: Goodbyes

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Reviewer: Larry Anonymous Date: 2006.03.29 - 04:25PM Title: Goodbyes

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A beautiful, but sad chapter. I was totally amazed. I could almost feel the emotion Harry felt as he spoke at the funeral. All I can say is.... Wow.

Author's Response: Thanks! THat's the kind of reaction I hope for! Abraxan



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.03.23 - 03:30AM Title: Goodbyes

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Ugh. This was tough to read. I hate seeing Harry in so much pain. What he said at the funeral was paritcularly well done. It was heartfelt, but it wasn't so eloquent to be unbelievable. This was all very sad just as the last 2 chapters have been. Excellent work.

Author's Response: Thanks - that was a hard chapter to write, but it needed to be done. I thought Harry handled himself very well. Glad you liked it. Abraxan



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.20 - 10:11PM Title: Goodbyes

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Did I mention how beautifully you write. I actually cried reading this chapter and believe me I DON"T cried. This chapter moved me. From Harry's speech to his break down at the coffins to his emotional meltdown with Remus. Harry needed to cried. To release all the pain his felt. All that pain for someone so young it's just too too much. God Bless him.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad the chapter touched you so - that was my intent, to make you feel Harry's pain. Thanks for writing! Abraxan



Reviewer: G and H Anonymous Date: 2005.12.03 - 04:23PM Title: Goodbyes

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The last few chapters, since Casey and her familys death, and this chapter are all so sad I actually cried. It's the first time I've cried reading any story I almost couldn't stop and I'm still feeling really sad. :( =(

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're feeling sad, but I'm glad my story touched you so deeply! Thanks for writing, and I hope you're feeling better soon! Keep reading, it isn't ALL sad! Abraxan



Reviewer: TeDDy-Joshua Anonymous Date: 2005.11.04 - 01:36AM Title: Goodbyes

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Damn you!!! Your good at that sad stuff you had me crying. Course im a sentive person so yeah :p



Reviewer: haley Anonymous Date: 2005.08.23 - 05:42PM Title: Goodbyes

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ok. i read this all in one go and couldn't get enough. so it was a pleasant surprise to see it already finished at ff.net! yay! thanks! er, so i'll go back to reading now... *blushes*

Author's Response: No reason to blush! But I can't respond to reviews on FF.net now since the fic is finished and their review system only allows one review per chapter. So if you want me to respond to your reviews, please review it here! Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Abraxan



Reviewer: me Anonymous Date: 2005.08.22 - 04:26PM Title: Goodbyes

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GREAT! hurry up with the next chapter

Author's Response: Hi! Chapters are uploaded regularly! Glad you're enjoying the fic! Thanks for writing! Abraxan




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