Reviews For The Refiner's Fire
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.04.23 - 08:25PM Title: Goodbyes This looks rather dangerous. I know that Albus is trying to help Harry deal with his grief, but pulling out memories seems a bit extreme. Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2011.02.24 - 09:58AM Title: Goodbyes Very moving chapter here. As I was reading previous chapters of your story, I was wondering how you could move Casey out of the way to make room for an eventual H/G relationship (a given here on SIYE) without killing her off. Despite half expecting it, you still managed to really move me with her death and Harry's response to it. Excellent writing. Reviewer: wave Signed Date: 2008.04.08 - 12:42PM Title: Goodbyes I really loved the chapter... i dont remmber myself crying so much like this before... it was really sadning moment right from funeral uptil the end.... i think removing the memory is the best course of action now since there is too much of grief too handle for him. Reviewer: harmoine Signed Date: 2008.02.14 - 08:24PM Title: Goodbyes this chapter was very moving and it almost brought tears to my eyes especially with regards to the funeral service of casey and her family. you did a really great job with how it was written and for the fact that harry needed this closure so that he could begin to heal from the pain and sorrow he is experiencing with her death. Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.01 - 08:43PM Title: Goodbyes thats very sad...bloody hell! this sucks (um not the story just what happened! lol) Reviewer: Avalon_Maiden Anonymous Date: 2007.02.18 - 06:40PM Title: Goodbyes Well that was depressing. Well-written but depressing. I can't say I liked the chapter. I'm not sure if that came out right... I'm rating it 10 but I don't /like/ it. I dunno... It was really well written and I don't know many people that can write a depressing chapter like that with all of those emotions and actually make the reader feel the emotions and feel like they were there. Reviewer: jlwitch Signed Date: 2006.05.02 - 12:45PM Title: Goodbyes uh oh!!! Is all I can say to the end of that one. This is intriguing, poor Harry, so much sorrow for someone so young. I'm surprised with everything the poor boy has been through, that not once, not yet, has he completely broken, and given up. Or simple lost his mind. If I'd been through as much as him I'd have broken, gone out of my mind, and given up on life all together. Reviewer: Larry Anonymous Date: 2006.03.29 - 04:25PM Title: Goodbyes A beautiful, but sad chapter. I was totally amazed. I could almost feel the emotion Harry felt as he spoke at the funeral. All I can say is.... Wow. Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.03.23 - 03:30AM Title: Goodbyes Ugh. This was tough to read. I hate seeing Harry in so much pain. What he said at the funeral was paritcularly well done. It was heartfelt, but it wasn't so eloquent to be unbelievable. This was all very sad just as the last 2 chapters have been. Excellent work. Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.20 - 10:11PM Title: Goodbyes Did I mention how beautifully you write. I actually cried reading this chapter and believe me I DON"T cried. This chapter moved me. From Harry's speech to his break down at the coffins to his emotional meltdown with Remus. Harry needed to cried. To release all the pain his felt. All that pain for someone so young it's just too too much. God Bless him. Reviewer: G and H Anonymous Date: 2005.12.03 - 04:23PM Title: Goodbyes The last few chapters, since Casey and her familys death, and this chapter are all so sad I actually cried. It's the first time I've cried reading any story I almost couldn't stop and I'm still feeling really sad. :( =( Reviewer: TeDDy-Joshua Anonymous Date: 2005.11.04 - 01:36AM Title: Goodbyes Damn you!!! Your good at that sad stuff you had me crying. Course im a sentive person so yeah :p Reviewer: haley Anonymous Date: 2005.08.23 - 05:42PM Title: Goodbyes ok. i read this all in one go and couldn't get enough. so it was a pleasant surprise to see it already finished at ff.net! yay!
thanks! er, so i'll go back to reading now... *blushes* Reviewer: me Anonymous Date: 2005.08.22 - 04:26PM Title: Goodbyes GREAT!
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