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Reviewer: CathyG Anonymous Date: 2005.07.23 - 04:36AM Title: First Date
Lovely! I think we are going to see a lot of this scene from many different writers...yours was a terrific first!
Reviewer: hutchess Anonymous Date: 2005.07.23 - 03:57AM Title: First Date
That was very well written! I can almost believe that Jo herself wrote it...it fits in perfectly with the story. However, in this sentence: "It felt right, and I honestly believed when I saw your face that it's what you wanted to." Shouldnt it be 'too' instead of 'to'? Very sweet, very fluffy! I myself was going to write a fic like this, but you seem to have beaten me to it!!
Reviewer: Rosebeth Signed Date: 2005.07.23 - 01:01AM Title: First Date
Very nice. This story is sweet and Ginny's last line is great. Made me laugh out loud.
Reviewer: shadowkat Anonymous Date: 2005.07.23 - 12:59AM Title: First Date
Aww thats so cute. It's nice to read someone elses take on what happened since JK didn't give us any info at all as to what happened...*sigh* anyway great job, can't wait to read more. I'm assuming there's more anyway since it doesn't say its completed.
