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Reviewer: Huskers Signed Date: 2008.03.13 - 04:35PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
Elementals can do anything. You've said it yourself. They shoudl be able to figure out a way to keep a fetch from self destructing. in the past when you have said Harry and Ginny have "all" knowledge avaliable to them through their awarness of the connectedness of things. One could argue that something is entierly new and say that is why Harry and Ginny can't figure it out, but becasue of the connectedness of things, once something new was discovered, the connectedness would assimilate it and it would be available for Harry and Ginny. I'll try not to harp on this, cause I know you don't have a story without mystery, but it is something I want to make sure I get accross to you.
Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.21 - 01:47AM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
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Reviewer: melissa Anonymous Date: 2005.07.09 - 12:18PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
i loved it but i take ballet and its one of my biggest pet peeves when people say pointe shoes have wooden boxes becuase its not wood...its cardboard and glue...but other than that i loved it!
Reviewer: Trixie7 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.29 - 08:56AM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
I really liked this, although I am worried about Ron, he's very much one of the good guys and I ope that he's not acting of his own free will if he is up to no good.
Reviewer: GemFire29 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.24 - 06:57PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
WRITE MORE!!!! o.O.. I just finished reading everything you have written.. and now im waiting for the rest ofthis one.. argh.. I want to read some more of this ^^. I loved it!!.. I love your style of writing as well ^^
Reviewer: jacsmompat Signed Date: 2005.06.21 - 06:33PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
Great story. I love the little girl Kyra. she sounded so cute. Im fascinated with where this story is going. I am waiting with bated breath for the next installment. Great job Stephanie. Hey Steph. Jaq here. Mom is reading me the chapters until my sight improves Fabulous work. Will we see an update before July 17th.
Reviewer: Lady of the Dragon Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 05:03PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
Wow! This story seems to finally be getting started for good! I can't wait for more, and I hope updates don't take too long... It tends to send me into withdrawal, lol. Cathy
Reviewer: Minay Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 04:53PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
Awesome!!! PARANOIA!!! Keep posting!
Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 12:02PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
So... The plot thickens! (I've always wanted to say that, and here it actually seems to apply *G*) You really know how to build suspense.. I do hope the next chapter won't be too long in coming *hopeful smile*
Reviewer: Kero Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 12:00PM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
The Order can't trust anyone can they? Harry can't even trust his own best friend! I have a feeling this is going to get a little confusing. Well anyway, excellent chapter!
Reviewer: dolphingirl79 Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 10:06AM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
as always another brilliant written chapter.
Reviewer: Tron Anonymous Date: 2005.06.20 - 09:48AM Title: THE FIRST OF SEPTEMBER
Wow! Lots of information and a bit of action and mystery. Excellent! I'm glad that Harry and Ginny are being careful. They are being manipulated. It would seem that several different groups are making a go at them at the same time. Ron was really off. Harry picked up nothing. That sounds like Cadmar back in Towards Tomorrow. Cadmar is dead, right? I would put my foot down and refuse to go on trip until things were more calm. Like I stated in my last review. Harry and Ginny owe the public NOTHING. They could disappear and never show their faces again and it would be their right. Please update soon.
