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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.16 - 05:01AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

Problem being I really don't think you will have anyone be freaking out since you have already ruined the future for us don't know why you did it but now is when we see the bad after effect of sending people from the future and telling us in to clear of words the prophecy. Though will say the interview of Harry was a heck of a good idea would of never thought half the things you did you wrote that very well I must say.



Reviewer: Huskers Signed Date: 2008.03.12 - 05:41PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Here we go. I'm looking forward to it.



Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.02.29 - 10:18PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Reviewer: PotterBoy90 Signed Date: 2007.02.06 - 12:59AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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OMG!!!



Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.20 - 05:57PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Awesome chapter! I've loved the rest of the chapters as well but I havent been able to review. I'm wondering if it was possibly the "butterbeer" they gave him that was able to give Voldemort the co-ords to get to him?

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Reviewer: MIssGinny Anonymous Date: 2006.06.09 - 02:40PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Reviewer: Chreechree Anonymous Date: 2006.01.15 - 02:32PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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And so it begins (Harry leaving his body). So Snape has 3 days to get Harry back into his body. I'm curious about what Neville's role is in this. I guess I should find the prophecy that pretained to him in all this and reread it, but I think I'll just plow on. I'm glad that the prophecies are all beginning. Should make for some engrossing and exciting reading. I'd also like to comment on the ministry inquiry. That was frightening stuff. The idea that they would sexually assault a teenager on top of drugging him, etc. is horrifying, but, sadly, not unrealistic. It was superbly written. I'm suspect of that butterbeer they gave him. Of course, maybe that's my own paranoia, but considering what they'd just done to him, I'm surprised he would drink anything they gave him. Was it a means to track him? Or was it Mundungus/ the spy in the Order? Hmmm. Brilliant story. I adore this series.

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Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2005.09.24 - 10:37PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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I still can't find anything plot-wise to criticise, but those spelling errors are starting to grate. It's "Shacklebolt", for instance, and "Lucius", and so on. Also, wasn't the Potter estate in Devonshire a chapter or two ago? That's at the other end of the country from the Lake District... Or maybe I'm just misremembering the previous chapter, that's quite possible. Other than that, there's not much to add to my previous comments; still a bloody good read.



Reviewer: critmo Signed Date: 2005.05.03 - 04:18AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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I won't freak out, but the way you portrait the Ministry is shocking. You really had my biting my nails and keybord alternately. At least I suppose it's got to do something with the Ministry.

Author's Response: Biting your keyboard? What flavor was it?



Reviewer: Dobbey Anonymous Date: 2005.04.02 - 06:37PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Good job. The interagation scene was very good. Can't wait till Harry gets his body back.

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Reviewer: UnrealityCheck Signed Date: 2005.03.29 - 07:50PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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AARRGGHH!!!! You CANNOT have just killed off Harry! Okay, I know you couldn't have, but man alive, what a great cliffie!



Reviewer: Lincoln Anonymous Date: 2005.03.25 - 03:39AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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I forgot to ask in my earlier review.. When's the penny going to drop for Mrs W. that Ginny's already married?

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Reviewer: annie Anonymous Date: 2005.03.24 - 07:13PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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this story is great. i can't believe the ministry is so evil. if people like mr weasley see victims of this new department, why isn't something done!?! poor harry. oh, i noticed a small consistancy error. harry was questioned about sirius- the interegator seemed still under the impression that he was guilty, but in vtowards tomorrow, remus told harry that the trus stroy had come out (chapter 14) for sirius will to be dealt with. keep up the good work, i can't wait for the next chapter

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Reviewer: Lindsey Anonymous Date: 2005.03.24 - 02:38PM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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OK, Going insain here! I...need...postage!!!! And I am sure everyone of your readers feel the exact same way! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post soon!!!! PLEASE!!! On hands and knees here!!! Please???

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Reviewer: Skip Anonymous Date: 2005.03.24 - 10:28AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Not jumping ship on you. They could have figured out by either Mundungus or from tracking Harry after he left the interragation. And I am sure we all knew that that was going to happen. You've made it plain that he will be gone for 3 days. Kind of appropriate here on Easter :) Update soon!

Author's Response: Ah yes . . .there IS

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Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.03.24 - 09:59AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Oh yeah, and I loved the bit with the House elves too, especially Shalinda's reaction to Ginny... :-)

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Reviewer: Sibling Creature Anonymous Date: 2005.03.24 - 09:47AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Wow... that was intense... I think the most disturbing thing about the MOM stuff is how realistic it seems... the thought of a government department or agency gaining that much power and abusing it that badly does not strike me as being terribly unlikely in the current environment, and its rather a scarey thought. I gotta say though, I have to wonder how much attention some of the other reveiwers have actually been paying to what they are reading... cliffie? yes.. evil? with *that* much forshadowing? I hardly think so... anyone reading and paying attention to TFG, TT, and the previous chapters of this tale will have a fair idea how things progress from here.. at least over the course of the next 3 days... :-) I definitely look forward to finding out the details however (I have been looking forward to this sequence since I first read the relevant chapter of TFG, I think it was) and so I also hope you will post the next chapters quickly. :-)

Author's Response: I love it when readers can link what I've written in previous work!

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Reviewer: RDC Anonymous Date: 2005.03.24 - 08:03AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Another heartstopping chpater! Please please update soon. Many chapters ago, I speculated that there was going to be a three-way fight between Harry, Voldemort and the Ministry. I now think after this chapter that I was wrong, the Ministry aka Fudge/Crofton are totally in league with Voldemort, they are just a lot more subtle than he is. I read the interrogation scenes with a dread fascination. Harry would have been toast without his mind-link to Ginny. Really well done! Fudge/Crofton have played their hand; how will the Order respond? It looks like we need a revolution or two!! I won't even comment on the amazing ending - I hope Ron is OK.

Author's Response: Or a miracle! (heh heh)

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Reviewer: James And Lily 4eva Signed Date: 2005.03.24 - 06:43AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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*scream* oh my god!!!! you better update !!!!!!!!!



Reviewer: MD Anonymous Date: 2005.03.24 - 01:39AM Title: OFFICIAL INTERROGATION

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Woman do not torture us and uptdate this very soon, this is two much for me to take, And Harry was taken by that woman from hell in front of his wife eyes. Just do it soon.

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