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Reviews For Today the Tempest
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.09.15 - 04:57PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING Really don't like you thinking there is something wrong with Neville just because he has some problems with remembering some things. I mean your theory went straight down the crapper since you need to take into account that Neville is the best in his year in Herbology if he can't extract information out at all than you needed to make him basicly retarded and not knowing anything I think... Basicly you think you messed up again. Reviewer: Huskers Signed Date: 2008.03.12 - 08:19AM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
The end of the sorting hat. I've never seen this anywhere in fanfic. Congrats on a totally new idea. I really like that Neville has a job to do. I don't like that he is on his way to being another superpower. Curious about the new DADA for the 5th-7th years. I'm guessing Dumbledore himself. When does Harry start working on his Elemental Magic control? And thank God they are back at school, it means no Molly for a while. If you can't tell, I really can't stand her as you've written her; of course maybe that's your goal. The whole scene last chapter with her reaction to Ginny healing Lupin and her dealing with Ginny skipping a grade, talk about blind. She thinks the girl is still 3 for goodness sakes. And I don't think anyone is doing themselves any favors by holding back the truth about just what Ginny is from Molly. Reviewer: bookish327 Signed Date: 2008.02.24 - 06:39PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
It all makes sense now. Neville's extremely poor memory has now been explained. This will have interesting ramifications for this school year, now that he'll be able to remember everything perfectly. Yep, very interesting. Reviewer: immortalphoenix Anonymous Date: 2006.12.19 - 10:27PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
No Review Reviewer: Katie27 Signed Date: 2006.06.01 - 12:15PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
Excellent! Thanks for writting! -Katie Reviewer: aznzoo Anonymous Date: 2005.08.09 - 02:43PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
This is a great story!!! I only got 1 question, in your universe, whats with the soulmate deal with George and Gabrielle? Since Fred and George are twins, would they technically share a soul or be linked somehow? Just an interesting twist to the whole George/Gabrielle ship Reviewer: Ginavera Signed Date: 2005.05.18 - 08:28PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
Not another one, poor Gin-Gin!!! All of those prophies, though you do this very nicely!! Reviewer: Casey Anonymous Date: 2005.04.28 - 02:40PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
Another amazing twist. I LOVE this story :D Reviewer: critmo Signed Date: 2005.04.28 - 02:28AM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
You never cease to surprise me. After bringing in more and more prophecies that more or less determining the future for your characters and readers, you resort to killing off the poor hat and leave people with choices ... Reviewer: Anneliese Anonymous Date: 2005.02.21 - 09:30PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
Fantastic as usual! You have some, erm...unusual pairings going on, but for some weird reason, they seem perfectly natural! That takes talent, that does. Your plot is awesome; I can't wait to see what happens next! I think I have a pretty shrewd idea of who is going to be teaching Defense classes, but you always seem to surprise me, so I'll keep it to myself. Keep with the updates! Wonderful story! Reviewer: SueP Anonymous Date: 2005.02.20 - 07:14PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
What an odd view you have of Neville. I like it. I think he deserves to end up being loved to bits (cute interplay between him and Luna) and somewhat brilliant (plus playing a role in saving Harry). Looking forward to the next thrilling chapter *grins* Reviewer: RinnaMarie Anonymous Date: 2005.02.19 - 02:20AM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
i stumbled across your story while at home in bed with the flu, and have been hooked since the first installment. Keep up the good work! Reviewer: Soggy Anonymous Date: 2005.02.18 - 08:08PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
Your updating to fast I can't review between chapters! J/K. Always loved the idea of wandless magic and really like the way you've done that. Can't wait to see how you reintegrate Remus into sociaty. Reviewer: Dawn Marie Anonymous Date: 2005.02.18 - 04:09PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
hmmm...Neville's parents might be able to recover that way, but it's hard to say... Well, I love the 'where banana go' thing! Oh, and my bff Amber, who reads w/me, would like to say we both love the Sorting Hat song/controversy! Reviewer: arios Anonymous Date: 2005.02.17 - 11:31PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
You amaze me! terrific story! Just one tiny itty bit: mind the little typos, like "Lucias" (I believe is Lucius, but anyway, who cares!) Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Signed Date: 2005.02.17 - 05:04PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
MY FAVORITE PART!!!!!
Ron grinned at Harry. "Not a bad idea though. Too bad we can't switch Crabbe's brain for a chimp's."
"Good heavens no!" said Neville in alarm. "Can you imagine Crabbe actually having a coherent thought?"
"Even if it was just "where banana go?'" said Harry, chuckling.
*snort* that was great!
I love this story, ROMANCE, adventure, mystery, and oh my side still hurts - humor!
So, how is Neville going to save Harry's soul? Will Ginny also treat his parents?
Reviewer: Kero Anonymous Date: 2005.02.17 - 04:49PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
Neville's playing a much bigger role in your stories than any other fanfic I've ever read. Keep up the great work and keep updating, please! Reviewer: destin4fl Anonymous Date: 2005.02.17 - 04:08PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
excellent work as usual! like the way you brought neville back into a stronger role and the change in the sorting was interesting. strong stuff looking forward to your next chapter! Reviewer: Cathy G Anonymous Date: 2005.02.17 - 03:45PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
Yes, yes yesyesyesyes!!!!! About 3 "pages" before the sorting hat ceremony started I thought, I wish the hat would just get fed up and refuse to sort...to insist that the students CHOOSE! And thats exactly what you did! And we have always felt that Neville's memory problems were the result of a little too enthusiastic obliviate after his parents torture. That's a plot point in the story I'm writing, in fact.
I like where you're going with George and Gabrielle...saw that coming, too. And before too many people say anything about their ages, George is 19 - Gaby 13. George is holding back until she is older. Six years difference is nothing in our world and less than nothing in the wizarding world...My parents were 7 years apart Mom 17 and Dad 24 when they married, married 47 yeaqrs until Mom's death. My mother-in-law was 15, father-in-law 22 when they married right before he shippedout in WWII...married 33 years until his death. Good plot line - don't let anybody guilt you out about it.
I have some theories on what you have planned for Harry etc, but in case I'm right I don't want to spoil it for anybody else...I'll email you.
I just got a fright with something you tossed out today, though. Please let them live happily ever after....please let Harry and Ginny BOTH live! Reviewer: HP Anonymous Date: 2005.02.17 - 03:42PM Title: THE END OF THE SORTING
George and Gabrielle? She is not even 13 and he ahs to be about 19! Pretty big age difference. | ||||
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