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Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.09.15 - 07:38PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2007.02.21 - 01:13PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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I'm not sure that would be Hermine's reaction, but the action scene was quite good.

Author's Response: You'll see more of Hermione in the chapters ahead that would explain her feelings a little better.



Reviewer: txreina Signed Date: 2006.03.03 - 11:06PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Wow what an exciting chapter, making out in the park then a battle. Boy their lives are never boring.



Reviewer: x Anonymous Date: 2005.11.26 - 03:12AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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i loved the thing between ron and 'mione before the attack "Right- no eagles" too funny



Reviewer: Sophia Montgomery Anonymous Date: 2005.05.15 - 12:47AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Dramatic! Interesting chapter.



Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Date: 2005.05.12 - 06:49PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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I liked the story but you kept putting in dashes - definitely not proper grammar. I liked the plotline though.



Reviewer: blackvengeance Signed Date: 2004.08.22 - 05:16PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Great chapter! I like that you managed to include fluffiness as well as action!



Reviewer: Malkah Midnight Anonymous Date: 2004.08.12 - 09:39AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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A great chapter, as per usual.



Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood831 Signed Date: 2004.07.19 - 12:55AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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OHhh great chapter. Plz update soon!



Reviewer: Socks4Dobby Anonymous Date: 2004.07.18 - 01:33AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Great chapter! For some reason, I laughed out loud when Tonks asked, "Where are you off to?" and Ginny responded, "The play park!" haha that was a lot more funny than it should have been...:-)



Reviewer: Cole Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 11:23PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Great chapter. I love the way in which Harry and Ginny are exploring their relationship, it has a lot of quirks, little jokes between themselves that go along with the "big moments", these little things are often overlooked in fan-fiction, and it adds a bit of realism. A very suspenseful chapter as well, and I do feel for Hermione, she only wants to protect her friends, as well as herself, and doesn't understand the responsibility that Harry has found thrust upon his shoulders. She will have some issues to overcome, of which I have no doubt that she will in time. Also I'd love to see an article in the Daily Prophet or Witch Weekly in which that kids spills the beans on Harry Potter kissing in the childrens play-park. I could see Harry being much less sympathetic to the child after that.. :)



Reviewer: Gillian Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 04:28PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Excellent job! I loved it! Hermione's such a loser!! Great job!!

Author's Response: Oh, dear. I guess I didn't do a very good job with Hermione. I wanted her to be somewhat sympathetic. Oh--well--you'll love the next chapter :) And Hermoine will be a bit more balanced later on in the story--she's just having "issues."



Reviewer: pigwidgeon Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 03:27PM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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I love it! I knew something was going to happen. Still, it was very sweet in the play park. This is the best story. Please update soon!



Reviewer: Melindaleo Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 11:39AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Loved the playpark, very cute, very sweet. Go Ginny up against Hermione, loved that. I'd like to see if Hermione would want to sit back and do nothing if it were HER parents under attack



Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Signed Date: 2004.07.16 - 11:12AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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This is the greatest, most wonderful story!!!! I am still so happy that you continued Wallpaper Moments. I think they are very in character. I loved the play park it was very sweet... The same as Harry, I would like to see more kissing though. Could that be arranged? Just curious.... :)

Author's Response: Well they were at the park until "sometime later" so that should hold him for awhile! :) Yeah--right he's 16. Poor Harry.



Reviewer: Shriya Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 10:55AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Nott IS good! I knew it! :) Anyway, I really like how you keep referring to wallpapering in the dialogue, it's fun... and this new Hermione-Ginny tension is going to be interesting- can't wait to see how it plays out!



Reviewer: Rogue13 Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 10:10AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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Very good, a good chapter indeed. A classic and original twist. I like it... A LOT! pls update soonest!



Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.07.16 - 09:15AM Title: Finally, Hogsmeade

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ooooh very good! I hate to say i just realized re reading the previous chapter (lunch?) that this is in the wallpaper series..it is, right? lol ahh i love those series!!! definately one of my favs! Well thats really cool, and im glad i finally figured that out. lol update again soon please!!!

Author's Response: rach--you crack me up! I'm glad it made sense, or at least was enjoyable before the lightbulb went off! :)




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