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Reviewer: nayin1704 Signed Date: 2018.07.20 - 07:20PM Title: Primum Par
Wish this is longer with the match and afterwards
Author's Response: As I am fairly new to writing, I'm not yet comfortable writing about the match. That being said, I might revisit and add on to it. I'm currently working on another piece from the same universe, Few months after the match. Thank you for reading and for leaving a review. Appreciate it.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.05.19 - 03:15PM Title: Primum Par
Nice characters. I would have liked to see the pep talk and the game. Good work.
Author's Response: I just started writing. So I don't know how well the Quidditch game will be, if I write now.
But I definitely want to write it. Maybe after a few more stories, I'll try my hand at it.
Thank you for reading and the review. Appreciate it.
Reviewer: V-L-K Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 04:12PM Title: Primum Par
Hello FireboltGin,
you have inspired me. I am not quidditch-story fan, but you heve inspired me some way. To writte the pep talk for exactly this match. Can I borrow your team for this purpose? I will promise the talk will surprise you. And it will be better as me previous work on this site.
V-L-K
Author's Response: Oh wow! That was unexpected.
Sure, you can do it. Is there any feature where u can tag me, so that I can see?
Happy writing 😍
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 12:46PM Title: Primum Par
This was a great scene! I like how you treated the characters. Ginny is often either a total badass or teary. I like that you made her tough and vulnerable. She's not a perfect person, and you show things that make her human. I do have trouble picturing Harry with long hair or a beard, but I like the idea.
H/G are my favorite ship. I didn't know there was a reddit for them.
I hope to read more from you in the future! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank You for the review.
Harry with long hair and beard is inspired by the artworks by @blvnk-art over on tumblr.
You should check out her works. They are amazing.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 06:36AM Title: Primum Par
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.05.18 - 06:19AM Title: Primum Par
Very sweet! I think you captured their personalities well - I love how Harry was able to calm her down. It was a bit short. It would be nice to see what happens with the scouts.
Author's Response: Eeps!
I'm so excited that you've read my story. You are one my fav authors and I love your Hinny. You've inspired me to write. So thank you for reading and leaving a review. I really appreciate it😍
