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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.07.24 - 07:08PM Title: Chapter 6

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I like how you're bringing in so many people! The scenes with Ron were great - hope he sees the error of his ways. A bit concerned that Dean is running out for milk - that doesn't sound good. Poor Katie!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.07.18 - 04:55PM Title: Chapter 6

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And the plot thickens



Reviewer: Bluest Witch Signed Date: 2018.07.11 - 07:03AM Title: Chapter 6

My bets are on Vane to be the villain!

Author's Response: Ah, an interesting theory my friend! I can neither confirm or deny this claim lol



Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.07.02 - 10:28PM Title: Chapter 6

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Whoa! Not poor Katie! I would have expected Tonks to be more serious, or maybe I was reading her wrong... Was she trying to avoid delivering the news?

And is Dean involved somehow in the Milk Man murders? If so, he should have taken care of Romilda. Oh dear, your story seems to bring out my most murderous tendencies... Will the Milk Man only murder women or will men start turning up too? Is anyone safe?

I keep wondering if Ron is going to meet Hermione, but no matter what he should cut Lav Lav loose. She's never right for him, lol. Poor girl. She was okay until she dated Ron (or should I say Won Won? Oy, I just threw up a little,,,). But it doesn't seem as though any of the family likes her.

Great job as always! Sorry I missed when it was posted, I've been in home improvement Hell the past week.

Author's Response: You are asking all the right questions! When I was writing Tonks in this scene I figured she would be trying to dodge the topic a little. Mix that with some shock at seeing your co-worker dead... I think humor is a strong defense mechanism. I have to agree, about Ron and Lavender. Mo matter how many times I re-read the Half Blood Prince; Lavender is never right for Won Won (I just threw up with you!) Thank you for the kind words and I hope the home improvement goes well!



Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.06.30 - 04:51PM Title: Chapter 6

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Uh oh, another one. Maybe they'll get some more leads this time. Can't see Dean being the culprit - he sounds too much of a good time guy to work out complicated murders. Maybe he's also fallen foul of the Milk Man in some way. Sounds like Ron may be ready to move on from Lavender, Ah well, lets wait and see.

Author's Response: Oh you have a keen mind there my friend! I'm curious what you think will really happen? You have suggestions, but you never define your thoughts.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 08:05PM Title: Chapter 6

BTW, I fear that if Dean is the killer and he's targeting women that have rejected him in the past GInny could be on his victim list!! :D



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 08:05PM Title: Chapter 6

BTW, I fear that if Dean is the killer and he's targeting women that have rejected him in the past GInny could be on his victim list!! :D



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.29 - 07:47PM Title: Chapter 6

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Jiminy Crickets! Victim number #3 and it's Katie Bell dang it! We also have a potential suspect in Dean Thomas unless that midnight milk purchase was just a clever mis-direction on your part! Seems strange that he suddenly had to leave Romilda to get milk which has been the murder weapon! Something doesn't add up here! Thanks for bringing Ron into this - for a bit there thought the next victim would be Lav Lav! Wonder if the classmate Ron saw was Hermoine?! This gave me a lot to consider! Can't wait for the next one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Oh I like your head space! I enjoy Ron. He comes into play again soon, though only a small part.




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