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Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.01.14 - 01:30PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice. Good to see the trust between Harry and Ginny.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.13 - 05:34PM Title: Chapter 1
What a lovely moment between Harry and Ginny!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.01.13 - 05:32PM Title: Chapter 1
Awwww. So touching and sincere.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.01.13 - 12:03AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice little one shot.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.01.12 - 06:03PM Title: Chapter 1
Short, but very sweet!
If you already have a more comprehensive (i.e., bigger) project underway, then please ignore this comment, but I thought I'd mention that the pointed poignancy of your prose would carry very well in lengthier pieces. Well written vignettes give readers that *Ahh!* intake of emotive breath, but when you apply the same style toward the up/down undulations of characters working past that series of plot challenges to crisis and resolution -- that type of piece can really grab readers; captivate them; invade their dreams.
Anyway, just sayin'! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I do have a couple longer projects in the works, so I really appreciate your comment! I love the reminder of my strengths and basically I just need to create a sequence of these moments, which feels much more doable :)
