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Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2019.01.19 - 10:32PM Title: Chapter 16

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Whoa! The last sentence is dramatic. Is this the prelude to the next chapter? How interesting!

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2019.01.19 - 06:06PM Title: Chapter 16

Curiouser and curiouser! Loved the line about "You definitely finished off Voldemort?" "Pretty sure" I love that he's at a place where he can joke about it. I feel bad for Ben if he's going to lose the wonder of this world. He reminds me how I would feel if I discovered it was all real, although I think the disappointment of not being able to do it would kill me.

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree - I think I would be eaten up with disappointment and envy if it were me. But Ben is incredibly selfless and positive!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2019.01.19 - 03:54AM Title: Chapter 16

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The plot continues to thicken... I literally have no idea who did it ha ha!
I love Harry's not so sublte match making attempts too :)



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2019.01.18 - 09:13PM Title: Chapter 16

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I can not wait for the next chapter.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2019.01.18 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 16

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This story has more twists and turns than a Grand Prix course! Sounds like Theia had a "Eureka" moment! If I'm not mistaken, I believe I detected a small spark between Theia and Ben! This one is getting real intense and is looking like maybe it is all of the above! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D




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