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Reviewer: rebelgoddess Signed Date: 2020.01.28 - 03:09PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2019.01.08 - 11:12PM Title: Chapter 14

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At last... a chapter dedicated to Ben's point of view! He is convincingly confused and overwhelmed with everything magic can do and I love his reaction to Teddy using the Floo. Harry'sā€¦ and Ginny's... admonition to not eat anything George offers him made me smile. I'm looking forward to reading about Ben helping Harry interrogate the suspects.

Well done with the Weasley Mother's Day celebration. Molly deserves the thanks and praise her family lavishes on her.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it, I had a lot of fun with this one.



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2018.12.17 - 05:21AM Title: Chapter 14

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Makes me wonder what Exactly feeling a floo flame without burning would be like. The sensory experience, even if ever so brief connected this reader to Ben. Such a lovely observational detail to slip in. I am a bit worried for Ben now though. Theia is a hell of a character... but her mother was nuts(loose interpretation), and she fell for a serial killer... that she still has some feelings for... although, if they aren't a little crazy it isn't as much fun. So go Beia...or Thein(?) ship. Sail true to the horizon.



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.12.06 - 08:15AM Title: Chapter 14

I have re read this 3 times now! My. Best chapter ever!

Author's Response: What a lovely thing to hear!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.12.05 - 08:47AM Title: Chapter 14

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Really, really enjoyed this chapter! Nice little break! Poor Ben was really put thru the ringer with the Weasley family gathering but he seemed to handle it in stride! Wonder if his liking the magical world at the end bodes well for him and Theia! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2018.12.04 - 10:46AM Title: Chapter 14

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Noooo, you can't leave it there! I don't know which bit is my favourite here. Ben getting used to the magical world, Harry's not-so-subtle little hint there about marrying a witch (I'm so rooting for Ben/Theia to happen!), or the fact that Harry is going to let Ben pretend to be a wizard. I can't wait to see that unfold!

Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing this chapter, so I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)



Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.12.04 - 09:33AM Title: Chapter 14

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What a wonderful chapter and glimpse into post-war Weasley gatherings! I loved it! I loved Arthur asking about the web, and George's "How dare you?" when Molly told him he'd been sweet, but mostly, I loved them taking the mickey out of Harry and Ben noticing how much Harry enjoyed it. He's finally a true Weasley. Love it so much! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! By the way, I have been rereading These Cuts I Have, and I just bow to your expertise in writing the Weasleys!!



Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.12.03 - 11:50PM Title: Chapter 14

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Lol. Never a boring minute with the Weasleys. Well done, you!


Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: glasscandlegrenades Signed Date: 2018.12.03 - 10:25PM Title: Chapter 14

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Such a happy chapter! Love seeing the Weasleys together.




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