Reviews For Hollow Ash
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2018.09.05 - 10:14AM Title: Chapter 6 Great to see an update! I wonder how Dennis is tied into it all? He has to have been there for a reason. I also keep wondering if there is come kind of memory, or muggle repelling charm in the area mucking things up. Curiouser and Curiouser. The thought of Harry not getting to play Quidditch makes me sad. Doesn't the Ministry have some sort of departmental league or something. It always brought him such joy. Reviewer: ellen Signed Date: 2018.08.20 - 05:47AM Title: Chapter 6 I love how Theia is really growing through this story. No-one can push her where she really doesn't want to go. She's going to be a great Auror in time. Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.08.16 - 10:48PM Title: Chapter 6 Lol. When is the next chapter? I bet Theia will volunteer anyway as she will be nicely forced into it. Good job! Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2018.08.16 - 09:11PM Title: Chapter 6 Great chapter. Engaging, funny and continuously adding to the mystery. I love the little asides we get of Harry and Ginny’s little family growing. I’ve already said this, but I just love Thelia. She is just a great character. She has a lot of tanacity, spunk, and drive to keep up with Harry and his moods and figure out this mystery. I can’t wait to see where you take this! Theia... haha... famous last words! Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.08.16 - 07:00PM Title: Chapter 6 Wonderful to see another chapter. I still do not know what is going on. Theia is great. Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.08.16 - 04:20PM Title: Chapter 6 Great to see another chapter! Theia sure has a talent for finding adventures! Marcy continues to be a mystery! Should be interesting to see what happens with Theia as her bodyguard! The exchange between Theia and Ben was cute too! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.08.16 - 10:59AM Title: Chapter 6 I just keep getting more and more curious as to what is going on with Marcy. Reviewer: BigFatMaybe Signed Date: 2018.08.16 - 09:36AM Title: Chapter 6 Great to see another chapter from you! The mystery deepens, meanwhile poor Theia just rolls from one awkward situation into the next. Solid chapter (especially that part with Ben and Theia was just great!), but there were some punctuation errors here and there. | |||||||
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