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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2019.01.16 - 07:47AM Title: Year 2 Chapter 6: September
It seems as if Harry occasionally has memory lapses if he can't remember a lot of the first weeks of September. It's usually a sign of being possessed.
Ah, that's what I meant when I doubted Harry's abilities. He ignores the only real clue he has ('Ginevra is the beginning'), and is wandering the castle without a real plan, letting Daphe do his Ginny duties.
Author's Response: Hmm... I meant it more as he's overworking himself and can't remember every minute detail but you have a good point.
Yeah, he's basically fallen onto believing only he can do this, something that is also kind of being pushed by Dumbledore. Hope my next chapter shows that Harry is learning and how much of an idiot he's being. It's good to have you reviewing again.
Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2018.12.18 - 08:33PM Title: Year 2 Chapter 6: September
Well whatever changes you made, I think they were for the best as this was a great chapter. I think it would indeed be a little silly to stretch the chamber plot as long as in canon given all that is different about Harry. Great work here!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.12.01 - 07:54PM Title: Year 2 Chapter 6: September
Very interesting so far. Keep it coming.
Author's Response: I'll certainly try! Thank you!
