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Reviewer: aimless Signed
Date: 2017.10.13 - 12:18PM
Title: Parry & Thrust
You got me hooked saying the story doesn't end here. I feel a little disturbed though when a 20+ years old war veteran Jimmy srarts to snog still underage Ginny Weasley.
Got a good laugh about you know what )
Author's Response: Yes, that part of him is actually 26, but he's in a 16 year old body, so he rationalized it was OK back in chapter 2. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reading! -gd
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2017.09.30 - 09:15PM
Title: Parry & Thrust
Love the ending!!! I don't know why I keep having to read every chapter twice to keep up. Perhaps, no wine before reading your story??? Anyways, well done!
Author's Response: Wine is OK, whine is not ;-) Thanks!
Reviewer: Inquisitor Signed
Date: 2017.09.29 - 12:36PM
Title: Parry & Thrust
"I was surprised, however, that Lucius was not with the others in Surrey."
Did you forget that Voldemort took Lucius Malfoy's wand sometime during that summer?
Author's Response: I'm glad I wasn't the only one who noticed that little detail. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Dad Signed
Date: 2017.09.29 - 05:36AM
Title: Parry & Thrust
I thought the last two paragraphs were hilarious.
Author's Response: Thank you - they were intended to be! I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2017.09.29 - 05:11AM
Title: Parry & Thrust
Interesting story.
Awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2017.09.29 - 05:00AM
Title: Parry & Thrust
Thanks for another fine chapter. It was a quite sneaky solution to get rid of riddle. Jimmy's experience in the US Army were surely helpful to defeat Tom. I was surprised, however, that Lucius was not with the others in Surrey.
Author's Response: When Harry & Co are captured and delivered to Malfoy Manor the following Spring, we see Bellatrix taunting Lucius over his continued lack of a wand, which illustrates just how far his star has fallen in the DE inner circle. Tom took his original wand just before Burbage's execution and it was destroyed the night of Harry's escape from Privet Drive. Lucius would have to sit out any raids for the duration of the war, unless Tom saw fit to let him have a new wand. Nice boss, eh?
Thanks for the kind words! - gd
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