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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.05.16 - 06:48PM Title: Persistence
Great chapter! James did a nice job working to redeem himself and trying to get to know Anna better. Simon also received a well deserved dumping.
Author's Response: My original idea for this story was simply these first two chapters. It was meant as a teaser of things to come. Anna, however simply wouldn't shut up, I knew there was more to tell. -N-
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.05.11 - 05:56PM Title: Persistence
Ah good girl use your head and heart in sync and you will never go wrong....kutgw
Author's Response: Annie has a lot to process. -N-
Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2017.05.11 - 10:35AM Title: Persistence
Great! Annie is a strong no nonsense woman, like James' mum. Perhaps that is what makes him attracted to her. It's lovely how his playful personality makes her forget about her woes.
Author's Response: I think she tries to be. James certainly brings some much needed laughter into her life. -N-
Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2017.05.11 - 12:29AM Title: Persistence
Really excited to read more, loved the original and The Potters friendship with the Charltons. Xx
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm just about to upload the newly edited chapter 3.
-N-
Reviewer: jmcmutt Signed Date: 2017.05.10 - 11:25PM Title: Persistence
I have been reading this story on mugglenet and have really enjoyed it. Your characters just come to life.
Author's Response: Thanks. It's good to bring it here, too. -N-
