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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed
Date: 2015.08.17 - 07:01PM
Title: Some Potter History
Another interesting chapter. I am eager to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed
Date: 2015.05.30 - 07:44AM
Title: Some Potter History
I wonder why Harry discusses Ginny's plans with Sirius. He better discusses the plans with Ginny. I had the feeling that he does not really feel at ease in connecting to Ginny. He even closes himself off from Ginny to do to stupid thoughtless things. Ginny should do something about it. She is the more responsible of the two.
The Potter history is of course overwhelming. I am impressed with how the two of them deal with that burden.
Author's Response: I realize it seems as though I didn't give Ginny an outlet to discuss things in this mix of people. There are some things that she couldn't discuss with Bill. I can't imagine anyone being totally happy with another person knowing all of their thoughts. Harry is still a child of the Marauders.
M.V.
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed
Date: 2013.09.10 - 10:40PM
Title: Some Potter History
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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed
Date: 2013.08.26 - 11:06PM
Title: Some Potter History
Great chapter. Love this story.
More, please.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
M.V.
Reviewer: Noellexcz Signed
Date: 2013.08.26 - 02:15PM
Title: Some Potter History
I love everything about this story. I think your an amazing writer and I cannot wait for your next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I will try to get the next update out as soon as possible.
M.V.
Reviewer: I Love Ginerva Signed
Date: 2013.08.26 - 03:53AM
Title: Some Potter History
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Reviewer: dshadel Signed
Date: 2013.08.24 - 09:41PM
Title: Some Potter History
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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed
Date: 2013.08.22 - 11:53PM
Title: Some Potter History
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Reviewer: BraverLeonheart Signed
Date: 2013.08.22 - 06:21PM
Title: Some Potter History
Perhaps personal choice but I feel that Harry holds too much power. As much as I like the mixing of world, Harry being related to 3 founders, The three brothers, the founder of the Templars and god knows what else to be a bit much. Like I say, personal preference. It certainly doesn't harm your fantastic story.
Author's Response: It is a bit much, but it will also add to the weight of the world on Harry and Ginny's shoulders.
M.V.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed
Date: 2013.08.22 - 09:43AM
Title: Some Potter History
Voldy is dead before he gets started....Ron is a worry for blabbing about for sure....Charlie is a close second....kutgw
Author's Response: Ron and Charlie seem to be a possibility for future trouble. We shall see. However, Voldy has already started a year ahead of canon's timeline.
Thank you for the review.
M.V.
Reviewer: Waylander Signed
Date: 2013.08.22 - 04:09AM
Title: Some Potter History
Interesting history. I can see how the tale of the three brothers grew into meeting Death instead of just making the Hallows.
There is just one problem with it. "My direct descendant was the youngest who created the Invisibility Cloak, Ignotus." Unless Harry or one of his children goes back in time and starts the Perevell familly, you most likely want to write "My direct ancestor was ..." It is just one of my pet peeves using descendant when it should be ancestor. Other wise I have seen no errors.
Keep on writing.
Waylander
Author's Response: Oi! and double Oi!
Thank you for pointing that out. I went back and changed it.
M.V.
Reviewer: alterdream Signed
Date: 2013.08.21 - 10:25PM
Title: Some Potter History
Another enjoyable chapter. You made up quite a bit of interesting history.
Author's Response: Thank you, I always like to intermingle the Muggle and magical worlds. It seems impossible that they don't affect each other.
M.V.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed
Date: 2013.08.21 - 10:18PM
Title: Some Potter History
Interesting history. I liked the intermingling of real and wizarding history.
Author's Response: Thank you! "The Davinci Code" is one of my favorite books.
M.V.
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