Reviews For Memoirs of a Red Headed Witch
Reviewer: English Muffin Signed Date: 2013.07.04 - 02:32AM Title: Grasping Smoke and Chasing a Myth This chapter doesn't make sense to me. The timeline seems off. If I am remembering correctly, when Harry, Ron and Hermione were at Malfoy Manor, it was during Easter hols, which is why Draco was home, and why they didn't worry about something happening to Ginny. Then Griphook went with them to Gringots immediately before the Battle of Hogwarts. So Ginny would have had a day at the most before being called to the school after finding out Harry left Shell Cottage. I am giving this chapter only a five because of these (in my mind) big errors. Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.03.25 - 07:43PM Title: Grasping Smoke and Chasing a Myth How frustrating for ginny to arrive at she'll cottage after Harry had left, but maybe for the best? I did wonder at bills comment about griphook sleeping upstairs as he left with them to go to gringotts. Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.03.25 - 07:43PM Title: Grasping Smoke and Chasing a Myth How frustrating for ginny to arrive at she'll cottage after Harry had left, but maybe for the best? I did wonder at bills comment about griphook sleeping upstairs as he left with them to go to gringotts. Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.13 - 03:11PM Title: Grasping Smoke and Chasing a Myth No Review Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.09.02 - 05:49AM Title: Grasping Smoke and Chasing a Myth
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2011.09.01 - 02:50PM Title: Grasping Smoke and Chasing a Myth Brilliant chapter. Please get the next one up as fast as this one. Reviewer: tangle elfwand Signed Date: 2011.09.01 - 09:06AM Title: Grasping Smoke and Chasing a Myth Is it bad that I validated this purely because you used a 30 Seconds to Mars song? Probably. But you're a pretty reliable author in terms of fitting all the requirements/SPAG rules, so meh. Good chapter. | |||||||
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