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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2012.03.23 - 11:30AM Title: Burrowed Secrets
I thought I would miss Harry actually being in these chapters, but there is enough mention of him that it feels like he is there...lol! I really feel like you are plugging lots of gaps and we are really getting to understand what was going on elsewhere.
Author's Response: Wow, no one has ever mentioned that before and I think I had done it subconciouly, mentioned Harry enough to make it feel like he was there, I am so intuited that you put t like that. I suppose thats the whole point to this story even when Harry wasn't there he always WAS. Memoirs are usually a collection of memories based around on thing, for example a war or a romance. In this car my objective was to make the memoir revolve around harry. Hense the "I remember when he" or "I remember the first time he" in trying to revolve it around Harry I was able to bring out the real Ginny, and that's what I love most about the pair of them. They bring out the best in each other. Thanks for reading I hope you enjoy the final chapters!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2011.08.18 - 10:48AM Title: Burrowed Secrets
This is my first review of this story as I have only just read the entire thing. I found it to be quite a good rendition of Ginny's 'part' in the whole Harry Potter story.
This chapter made me think of how lonely and sad Ginny feels. She can be quite scary to her brothers when she looses her temper.
KUTGW.
Reviewer: maisa potter Signed Date: 2011.08.16 - 08:21PM Title: Burrowed Secrets
I totally love your story... But I can't stop wandering, what was Charlie doing?... please update soon....
Reviewer: danno Signed Date: 2011.08.16 - 05:20PM Title: Burrowed Secrets
He froze, his menstruations with the peeler and potatoes ceased. “I…don’t know what you’re talking about.”
Hahaha, I think you meant ministrations, unless I'm mistaken. That or Ron has got some personal problems going on.
Reviewer: potslicker Signed Date: 2011.08.16 - 03:37PM Title: Burrowed Secrets
This is my first review of the story, so here goes:
I have read all the books, seen all 8 movies and have read over 175 fan fiction stories and by far yours is the best!!!!!
Your story is my favorite.
1) I hope you continue this story and no abandon it somewhere down the line
2) I want so bad for you to get to the end of the battle and see where you take Ginny and Harry.
3) In this chapter you have Ginny feel a wave of dread, is this just coincidental or is this a connection that Ginny has with Harry? If so, I would like see more?
4) Your incite of Ginny’s feeling and Molly is precious and has depth, keep that up.
All I can say is keep up the outstanding story telling and I look forward to each and every new chapter.
Reviewer: tloulee Signed Date: 2011.08.16 - 12:59PM Title: Burrowed Secrets
I just love Ginny's temper and the fact that ALL of her brothers are terrified of her when she gets going. Thanks for updating and can't wait for more...
