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Reviewer: santafe Signed Date: 2010.03.30 - 03:38PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this - I hadn't found time to read it before, but it's great. definitely worth the award! SF
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.03.09 - 06:16PM Title: Chapter 1
“We go home and you pee on it,” That was perfect!
And I love how awkward all the Weasley brothers were--that was wonderful.
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2010.02.14 - 11:00AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Kezza!
yeah yeah, I know I'm a bit late with reviewing but do please forgive me.
I have to be short today *you must be glad* I'm pressed for time.
Only you do cliché this brilliantly. Your sense of humor always blows me away and make me laugh even on a dreary day like this.
Thank you Thank you Thank you.
Hugzzzzz. C
Author's Response: Laughter is good medicine!
Reviewer: Jpatch Signed Date: 2010.02.14 - 10:37AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved "the weasley brother brigade" coming to interrogate poor Harry
Author's Response: Poor Harry ... *pats him*
Reviewer: lalachoa Signed Date: 2010.02.14 - 06:09AM Title: Chapter 1
Five stars! Am laughing all throughout!
Reviewer: lalachoa Signed Date: 2010.02.14 - 05:40AM Title: Chapter 1
Five stars! Am laughing all throughout!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 07:40PM Title: Chapter 1
sorry about that...once was enough. My computer sometimes puts up two when I only meant to put up one.
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 07:38PM Title: Chapter 1
How many times did they DO it? I give Harry points for not hexing George so he HE couldn't EVER do it!
For a cha;;enge, this is great stuff!
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 07:38PM Title: Chapter 1
How many times did they DO it? I give Harry points for not hexing George so he HE couldn't EVER do it!
For a cha;;enge, this is great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks, man!
Reviewer: bones2009 Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 05:48PM Title: Chapter 1
I have issues with this... then again I'll probably have issues with a lot of stories coming out of this contest.... I never understood why Ginny can not want a baby just as much as Harry does/would. Yes she is independent but having a family does not mean you can not be independent too. Why does she nearly always have to stop playing on the Harpies because she got pregnant??? Why can't she quit the Harpies because she wants to try to have a family with Harry?
Fanfiction authors all have her going to Hermione first. Good Grief I mean I know its part of the contest but still can we get around having to go to Hermione every time.
Do not get me wrong some of things are my views and I understand that. Its a good piece of writing but I feel like I've read it already.
Author's Response: Okay well first I think you would need to read the whole story before you complain about it. You don't know where it's going. Who said she doesn't want a baby? NOWHERE in this fic so far has she not wanted a baby - and if she does say that - you still should wait until the end of the fic because ... well just trust me on that one. I don't know where you got that independent thing - you're taking out your issues or issues of another fic on mine which isn't fair. Who said she has to stop plaing if she got pregnant? Gwenog just said she wanted her cleared - didn't say cleared for what. Again, jumping the gun. There are a lot of reasons to have to know if you are pregnant before playing a contact sport - like taking precautions. In this case Ginny feels a bit off and Gwenog wants her cleared to play - because she feels off. A pregnancy test is just one of the tests she wants. Is it my fault Ginny fixated? Think about that - why'd she fixate on it? Again gun jumping. Going to Hermione is not part of the contest. But I have reasons for her going to Hermione. Like I said - Ginny wants a quick answer. Who else would give her that? Like I said, I feel like you've jumped the gun and taken out your frustrations on this fic and honestly most of them are misplaced in this story. And anyway - what did you expect from a prompt so cliched?
Reviewer: GinnyP7 Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 05:06PM Title: Chapter 1
This is so-o-o-o way beyond trite! I love it. Can't wait for your update.
Reviewer: bookworm37 Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 02:36PM Title: Chapter 1
Cliché maybe, but this was sooo funny! I laughed the whole time while reading. Great beginning! Keep the next chapters coming!
Author's Response: Yay! Laughter!
Reviewer: melindaleo Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 12:49PM Title: Chapter 1
Snigger. Oh, tjhis is fun, Kezza. Loved the closeness between all the boys, particularly Harry ribbing them right back. Most of all, I was touched that George was okay and back to his old self. Nicely done.
Author's Response:
Author's Response: I love how much you love George and want him to be okay! *wanders off to create more fun*
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 12:32PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Esp the "You two are girls" line. Can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 12:22PM Title: Chapter 1
Kezzabear, you are one of my favourite authors and I just know I will enjoy reading anything you write. LOL. You have truly gone completely bonkers. Any more?
Love this story. Love it.
Author's Response: Ah, my hypnotisation is working just fine then ... ;)
Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 11:55AM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning, Kezz! I LOVE it. Very funny and fresh. I rolled my eyes at the prompt, too. This is proof that you can take something cliche and make it fresh.
Author's Response: Well lets hope it remains fresh and doesn't wilt like the lettuce at the back of my vegetable crisper ...
Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 11:29AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the conversations with Harry.....particularly the last with George and Ron. The "voices" are truly in-character and distinctive. Well done!
Reviewer: LunatikPandora Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 11:15AM Title: Chapter 1
i think i just died a little... ahahaha... *wipes away a tear*
this is awesome. i absolutely love your stories, and this one... well, it has my family staring at me like i'm insane, because i'm cackling at a computer screen. but i'm sure you get the point. XD
well done, so far.
Author's Response: Next time, set up a screen so the family can't see you going insane ;)
Reviewer: LadyRuthless Signed Date: 2010.02.13 - 10:58AM Title: Chapter 1
Great beginning!!
For some reason this strikes me as the same H/G as "I'll be there for you," I think it was this line that did it:
“Oh Merlin’s dangly toenails!”
I, of course, am hoping for at *least* four chapters :-)
Author's Response: I can promise you two ... I think three ... four I will attempt ;)
