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Reviews For Harry Potter: Revelation
Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.03.22 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really excited that you aren't having Adam compete--too many authors make him compete no matter what else is going on in the story. Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 10:56PM Title: Chapter 4
First, thank you for updating so quickly! This is one of my most favorite stories! Quite different! Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 10:47PM Title: Chapter 4
No Review Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 10:45AM Title: Chapter 4
So, GOF will be more of a background plotline in this story then. That will keep this story from getting too "busy" . We still don't know if Voldemort has help now or not, I'm assuming that he does not. However, the end of POA does give him his help and this wormtail will be a bit more competent, at least in terms of magic. That will make the next story more interesting as Voldemort will have to have a (hopefully less convoluted and more believable) plan for regaining his body. Unless, of course, Crouch Jr breaks free on his own and becomes the helper... Ah, so many possibilities.... Reviewer: Vukk Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 02:07AM Title: Chapter 4
I am curious as to what reaction the dragon and dementors will have to the other. Also, with their being so many adult guests watching, what will the reaction in the prophet be? Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 10:58PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, I'd rather expect Adam to try to find out what "Avada Kedavra" means, then.... Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 4
Good chapter as always, looks like he is going to see his childhood if the Dementors keep coming. Can't wait for the next update Reviewer: Goodygurl Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 08:18PM Title: Chapter 4
No Review Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 06:10PM Title: Chapter 4
I was worried for a minute that Harry or Ginny would end up in the Tournament, but I'm glad they didn't. Poor Harry, he can't catch a break. I'm glad Ginny came back from Hogsmeade and spent the day with him. Great ending! Can't wait to see what happens next :) Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 04:21PM Title: Chapter 4
That's interesting. Adam/Harry isn't in the tournament. And without Harry's influence, the other Champions performed better than in the books. I wonder if Adam will ask for Patronus lessons. And I wonder if Lupin will learn what Adam saw this time, and cave on his promise not to tell Adam who he really is. I am enjoying this story very much, and I can't wait to see how things develop. Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 03:57PM Title: Chapter 4 poor harry and albus really screwed up with harry and now will not be able to have the smae relationship...kutgw Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 12:46PM Title: Chapter 4 Good Chapter doesn't Dumbledore still have Harry's cloak Reviewer: curren Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 12:40PM Title: Chapter 4 great, another update... Always a thrill to read Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 12:07PM Title: Chapter 4
NICE Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:40AM Title: Chapter 4
I still say Darn Dumbledore. Hope McGonagal gets to know Adam's true identity soon. However she shouldn't let dumbledore control her like Remus has allowed him to. Reviewer: rahat5810 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:40AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow. At least you did not make him one of the champions. And dementors with combined with the tournament should be good. Anyway great chapter. Waiting for the next one. Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:10AM Title: Chapter 4
So the Triwizard will act like a magnet calling forth the Dementors because of the happy emotions from the crowd? Interesting take and method of combining books 3 and 4. It's also interesting that you didn't put Harry/Adam in the tournament. What happened to Ginny at the end of the chapter? Did she faint too? Any sign of Sirius? I'm eagerly waiting for the next one. Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:01AM Title: Chapter 4
Yawn.....was something suppost to happen this chapter? well, moving right along now... | ||||
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