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Reviewer: DukeBrymin Signed Date: 2010.03.22 - 03:22PM Title: Chapter 4

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I'm really excited that you aren't having Adam compete--too many authors make him compete no matter what else is going on in the story.

Author's Response: Thanks! When I plotted this out it seemed the only way to differentiate from canon. Its either completely the same or different.



Reviewer: hms42 Signed Date: 2010.02.06 - 01:30AM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: Prof McGonagall Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 10:56PM Title: Chapter 4

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First, thank you for updating so quickly! This is one of my most favorite stories! Quite different!
You really got me with this new twist! I was sure that HP's name would come out of the goblet and start unraveling the truth...but NOOOO...

And I guess it makes sense...nobody knows that he's HP, so noone wants to trick him into anything.
Now, the interesting question is: how will Voldemort regain his body...or will he???

And what about the dementors...will they drive Adam to discover the truth?
What about poor Lupin? I have a feeling that he will try SO hard not to blurt out the truth, that he will act so strangely that he will actually alienate Harry/Adam.

So, possibilities abound and I can't wait to see where you lead us...yet again!
Keep up the great work and PLEASE keep updating as quickly as you have been!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I can\'t answer any of your questions other than to say keep reading. Thanks!



Reviewer: Kage James Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 10:47PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: seekers_destiny Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 10:45AM Title: Chapter 4

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So, GOF will be more of a background plotline in this story then. That will keep this story from getting too "busy" . We still don't know if Voldemort has help now or not, I'm assuming that he does not. However, the end of POA does give him his help and this wormtail will be a bit more competent, at least in terms of magic. That will make the next story more interesting as Voldemort will have to have a (hopefully less convoluted and more believable) plan for regaining his body. Unless, of course, Crouch Jr breaks free on his own and becomes the helper... Ah, so many possibilities....

A bit of a cliffhanger here. Harry/Adam will now have more questions to ask and I wonder if a certain werewolf will be put on the spot. Harry/Adam does not have as much reason to turn to Remus now since he is ignorant of their connection but he is probably Harry's favorite teacher since DADA is his favorite class...

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes he sure will have questions.



Reviewer: Vukk Signed Date: 2010.01.30 - 02:07AM Title: Chapter 4

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I am curious as to what reaction the dragon and dementors will have to the other. Also, with their being so many adult guests watching, what will the reaction in the prophet be?

Author's Response: The Minister will have to do some explaining to the visiting schools. I\'m not really sure of the effect on the dragons. The handlers will probably have them under control



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 10:58PM Title: Chapter 4

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Well, I'd rather expect Adam to try to find out what "Avada Kedavra" means, then....

Author's Response: Yes, he will have questions! Cheers



Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 08:35PM Title: Chapter 4

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Good chapter as always, looks like he is going to see his childhood if the Dementors keep coming. Can't wait for the next update

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Goodygurl Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 08:18PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 07:28PM Title: Chapter 4

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Interesting.
Update soon.

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 06:10PM Title: Chapter 4

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I was worried for a minute that Harry or Ginny would end up in the Tournament, but I'm glad they didn't. Poor Harry, he can't catch a break. I'm glad Ginny came back from Hogsmeade and spent the day with him. Great ending! Can't wait to see what happens next :)

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Reviewer: jediprankster Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 04:21PM Title: Chapter 4

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That's interesting. Adam/Harry isn't in the tournament. And without Harry's influence, the other Champions performed better than in the books. I wonder if Adam will ask for Patronus lessons. And I wonder if Lupin will learn what Adam saw this time, and cave on his promise not to tell Adam who he really is. I am enjoying this story very much, and I can't wait to see how things develop.

Author's Response: Thanks! All your questions will be answered in upcoming chapters



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 03:57PM Title: Chapter 4

poor harry and albus really screwed up with harry and now will not be able to have the smae relationship...kutgw

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Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 12:46PM Title: Chapter 4

Good Chapter doesn't Dumbledore still have Harry's cloak

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes Dumbledore does still have the cloak



Reviewer: curren Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 12:40PM Title: Chapter 4

great, another update... Always a thrill to read

(small nitpick though, it's Viktor Krum... half the time you write it with a C, half the time with a K, like you're not really sure which one it should be.)

Author's Response: Ok, thanks! I\'ll fix the errors



Reviewer: Comet Moon Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 12:07PM Title: Chapter 4

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NICE

Makes you wonder what happens next year

Ja ne

Jim

PS. Dumbledore must suffer

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Reviewer: LeprechaunJV Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:40AM Title: Chapter 4

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I still say Darn Dumbledore. Hope McGonagal gets to know Adam's true identity soon. However she shouldn't let dumbledore control her like Remus has allowed him to.
Update soon.

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Reviewer: rahat5810 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:40AM Title: Chapter 4

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Wow. At least you did not make him one of the champions. And dementors with combined with the tournament should be good. Anyway great chapter. Waiting for the next one.

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Reviewer: bengpotter31 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:10AM Title: Chapter 4

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So the Triwizard will act like a magnet calling forth the Dementors because of the happy emotions from the crowd? Interesting take and method of combining books 3 and 4. It's also interesting that you didn't put Harry/Adam in the tournament. What happened to Ginny at the end of the chapter? Did she faint too? Any sign of Sirius? I'm eagerly waiting for the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2010.01.29 - 11:01AM Title: Chapter 4

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Yawn.....was something suppost to happen this chapter? well, moving right along now...




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