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Reviewer: sunnyseaforever Signed Date: 2012.05.09 - 12:16PM Title: Parenthood

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Nice ending. Harry joking about his strange dream about Ron and Hermione in the rose garden. The mention of Rose's conception was a nice touch.



Reviewer: kash2110 Signed Date: 2008.10.07 - 05:43PM Title: Parenthood

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I long the way Harry was acting, some of his lines were great. And Ginny, she was the perfect little mother but as Molly's her mum, guess she'd pick up an awful lot of tips!!

A good story!



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2008.07.18 - 01:23AM Title: Parenthood

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Judged for competition.

Long time no see, Ladonna! Has it already been two full years since your last challenge? You haven't written in any challenges since before DH! Well, I'm glad that you're back to writing.

When the young James and Lily arrive, they reveal information about the future, just as in most of the other entries. They tell Fred that he's fated to die -- but laughing at Uncle Percy! LOL! And Ron names his daughter Rose after -- his and Hermione's love nest? LOL! Of course, we know that the twins' parents won't tell them the truth about everything until they're older.

Princess Ginny and the six gits? LOL! What a bedtime story. In a way, the bedtime story is a summary of Harry and Ginny's friendship -- watered down, of course, for the kids. Let's hope that Ron doesn't find out that Harry/Ginny have been telling them stories about how he's a hungry git!

Many stories end with everyone being Obliviated. The note about the older Harry being unable to Obliviate himself was a nice idea -- with the visit becoming a "dream sequence." Maybe he'll keep that dream in mind when he's dating Cho.

Overall, great fic, with your usual mix of drama and humor. I wish you luck in the challenge!



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2008.07.06 - 03:18PM Title: Parenthood

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Harry really does seem to be a prat at that age--all most a little too much so. Hmm…I wonder how they explain those sheets after Dumbledore is finished. Overall this is a nice story and enjoyable to read. I would have developed the characters of James and Lily a little differently. They don’t seem to be evil enough, although Harry certainly thinks so. One can only imagine their future lives. Thanks. Eric B.



Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2008.07.01 - 09:13PM Title: Parenthood

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I have to say that the beginning of part one was weak....but the rest was very, very good! I particularly liked the way your used the repetition of "anything is possible" and the interaction between the younger and older Harrys. And your explanation for the name "Rose"....unforgettable, d*mn you! **grin**



Reviewer: TJ13 Signed Date: 2008.07.01 - 10:55AM Title: Parenthood

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2008.06.30 - 05:57PM Title: Parenthood

ah albus screwed around with life again and harry was smart to have his older self to help him out...and he was the dumb ass to have the kid drink water then again not use the loo....kutgw




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