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Reviewer: LadyRuthless Signed Date: 2009.04.29 - 10:23AM Title: My Harry

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I'm really enjoying this, but it wasn't a "couple of days" after Harry and Griphook left before they got the warming
cue on their galleons, it was the same night!!



Author's Response: You know, I\'ve already corrected that once, and it\'s still wrong! Thanks for pointing it out again for me. Thanks for the kind review.



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 09:48PM Title: My Harry

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This story IS incomplete. Don't be afraid to continue it to its logical conclusion! Since JKR didn't give us anything between the Last Battle and the epilogue, you have a great opportunity to tell us what happened next, why it took them so long to get married and then to start having kids. Don't waste it!

Author's Response: hmmm... I never thought of going that far with it. But I have to say, I do like the idea. Check back sometime after January and you might see your ideas come to fruition. Thanks a lot!



Reviewer: HGfan Signed Date: 2007.12.14 - 03:07PM Title: My Harry

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Loved this story! I hope you'll write more in the future. I truly enjoyed it. Thanks!



Author's Response: I'm definitely going to be writing more in the future, but my current plans are being put on hold. Unfortunately, Christmas means busy, and nothing gets busier than College setting deadlines. But rest assured I will be writing more. Glad you enjoyed it so much.



Reviewer: BrewBreaker Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 11:02PM Title: My Harry

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It's a very nice story and you do a good job of portraying her emotions, but I agree with Elementum. You can't just end the story there. Sure, we know that he comes back and they live happily ever after, but if you don't give your story a conclusive ending showing this it'll just seem unfinished.

Author's Response: It's the exact reason why I may continue it. I know there's a lot more scope with Ginny's point of view, probably more than there is Harry's, and I know where abouts I could take it, but for now, I'm not sure if I'm going to be. not for the moment anyway. Perhaps with enough reviews =)



Reviewer: bransfolly Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 07:52PM Title: My Harry

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cute story, flows quite well. One slight mistake is that from leaving Shell Cottage to the battle at hogwarts was one day not a couple of weeks. Still, well done

Author's Response: Thank You. I actually don't know why that mistake is there, I did most of the writing with a Deathly Hallows Timeline up. I'll change it when I do I redraft, Thanks for pointing it out.



Reviewer: Elementum Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 05:47PM Title: My Harry

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OK, I loved it I really did, but you can't end it theeeere! I mean, not that we don't know what happens or anything but-but...it feels incomplete somehow.

Awsome though, regardless. I really liked the emotions of Ginny and how you played them out. Fred's death, especially, was heart-breaking all over again. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. as I said, it's "tentatively complete" I may be continuing, however, I think I'd like to try something else. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Thank You




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