Reviews For My Knight, My Harry
Reviewer: LadyRuthless Signed Date: 2009.04.29 - 10:23AM Title: My Harry
I'm really enjoying this, but it wasn't a "couple of days" after Harry and Griphook left before they got the warming
Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2007.12.24 - 09:48PM Title: My Harry
This story IS incomplete. Don't be afraid to continue it to its logical conclusion! Since JKR didn't give us anything between the Last Battle and the epilogue, you have a great opportunity to tell us what happened next, why it took them so long to get married and then to start having kids. Don't waste it!
Reviewer: HGfan Signed Date: 2007.12.14 - 03:07PM Title: My Harry
Loved this story! I hope you'll write more in the future. I truly enjoyed it. Thanks!
Reviewer: BrewBreaker Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 11:02PM Title: My Harry
It's a very nice story and you do a good job of portraying her emotions, but I agree with Elementum. You can't just end the story there. Sure, we know that he comes back and they live happily ever after, but if you don't give your story a conclusive ending showing this it'll just seem unfinished.
Reviewer: bransfolly Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 07:52PM Title: My Harry
cute story, flows quite well. One slight mistake is that from leaving Shell Cottage to the battle at hogwarts was one day not a couple of weeks. Still, well done
Reviewer: Elementum Signed Date: 2007.12.09 - 05:47PM Title: My Harry
OK, I loved it I really did, but you can't end it theeeere! I mean, not that we don't know what happens or anything but-but...it feels incomplete somehow.