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SIYE Time:4:49 on 24th August 2017


Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.11.28 - 02:41AM Title: My Knight

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You might want to think about getting a Beta to go over your story and help to edit it before you post them. They could help you avoid spelling errors, as well as avoid using phrases like "me and him" when in the particular instances it should be "he and I"

Michelle

Author's Response: Spelling for me is usually a strong point. If you are American (I don't know if you are), then you may be referring to the Americanisms such as realise (realize), Grey (Gray) and colour (color). Being English, i write the English forms of the words. Grammatically, i've never been sound, and i know this. probably due to my undying arrogance for thinking that Microsoft Word is wrong in every instance. it did point out the point you made, but i ignored it. i will go back and change it, but i simply didn't not realise it was the correct way to write, it sounded wrong to me.



Reviewer: sweetdreamer285 Signed Date: 2007.11.27 - 07:54PM Title: My Knight

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Hey, even a good strory can't help being cheesy, adds to the gooey-fluffy feeling I'm having now after I've read this. Looking foward to your update! ^_^

Author's Response: Yeah, you gotta love the cheesiness. Glad you get the gooey-fluffy feeling (which i'm taking to be a good thing =) ). I'll make sure I update Asap, i have started writing it.



Reviewer: Elementum Signed Date: 2007.11.27 - 08:45AM Title: My Knight

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The ending, although slightly cheesy, was perfect so don't worry about it. ^.^ I loved the story all around but I diiiid see a small mistake. Harry was at detention with Snape during the last Qudditch match in HBP, not Umbridge.

I love how you made Ginny sound. So straightforward and to the point about everything. Just how our Ginny is. Awesome job.

Author's Response: Of course it was Snape, how did i make that mistake. it's not even the right year! I'll edit that, thank you! thanks a lot for the kind review, hope you come back for the next chapter!




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