Reviews For Saving Harry
Reviewer: FlaGinnyGirl Signed Date: 2010.04.15 - 11:54PM Title: Consequences The first part of this chapter where Harry thought he might be sebt to St. Burtus' reminded me of when Tom Riddle thought DD was a Dr. there to check him out... Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.10.11 - 06:09PM Title: Consequences I do like it don't quite know what to think about with this whole moving him in with the Weasleys though. It is kinda sad to say but I don't see Dumbledore actually ever moving him he thought he was to right but this is au and do like the idea so will see where it takes me. I do really oddly enough like how you have Harry interacting with Dumbledore. I do think that cannon should of been the same way till Dumbledore gave Harry a reason to trust him since none of his actions showed Harry whould of. I am almost positve that you will get Harry to feel differently about Dumbledore since your story doesn't give off that vibe but you have created the most like Tom Harry I have read. Would of been interesting to see how you would of gone down that path if you would of. Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.15 - 05:02PM Title: Consequences oh dear, he really doesn't like dumbledore, i do hope he gets over this Reviewer: Abraxan Signed Date: 2008.08.23 - 08:57PM Title: Consequences Oh, no. Harry's going to break soon if he continues to feel this way! i think your version is much more the way it would've been in reality than the way it was originally written, When I saw the first film and later read the books, I was surprised Dumbledore didn't go to pick Harry up himself, and even more surprised that he hadn't kept tabs on him all those years. Dumbledore didn't seem like that irresponsible a person, but staying away from that child was the height of irresponsibility. This is a very powerful chapter. Well done! Reviewer: I_love_hpforever Signed Date: 2008.06.27 - 12:06AM Title: Consequences A CLIFF HANGER??? I am SOOO glad that the next chapter is already posted or I'd be sitting here, rocking back and forth, waiting for it. AMAZING story, depressing plot but I love it still. Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.05.11 - 12:42AM Title: Consequences Adults always think they know better, and usually do, but they should always, at least, inform kids of things, especially when they affect them so much. Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2008.02.21 - 07:34PM Title: Consequences Sorry I haven't kept up with your story. After reading this chapter, I'm sorrier than you might imagine. A wonderful chapter and one that has me excited to read the next. :) Chris Reviewer: GinnyLover Signed Date: 2008.01.20 - 10:10AM Title: Consequences I feel really really sorry for Harry. He's in no shape to attend school yet. I hope the Weasleys really help him quick! Reviewer: Harry GiNiny POttEr Signed Date: 2008.01.20 - 08:26AM Title: Consequences This is a wonderful story you are doing a great job. update soon!!!! Reviewer: Leonheart666 Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 04:20PM Title: Consequences Merlin, what have they done to this poor child indeed. Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 02:02PM Title: Consequences Jim, I had to come back and let you know that this story is haunting me. I honestly can't get it out of my head. You already know how personally I took the preschool part, but I'm past that now. Your descriptions of Harry as an abused child are so realistic and disturbing that I can't shake them. This is outstanding writing. I really look forward to your postings. I have to have Harry getting better so I can sleep. Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 03:07AM Title: Consequences Great chapter and very emotional as well. Looking forward to the next chapter. Well done. Reviewer: omega13b Signed Date: 2008.01.19 - 12:18AM Title: Consequences I would say Dumbledore's actions in this chapter show of a person who's plan went horribly wrong and is trying his best to clean up the mess with out having create a bigger mess. It is also showing that Dumbledore is making an effort to make up to Harry. It would be suicide for Dumbledore to send Harry back to the Dursleys the next summer with Molly Weasley knowing how Harry was treated there (I can imagine the howler she would send him... *thoughts of the following howler arriving during the end of the year feast* ALBUS PERCIVAL WOLFRIC BRIAN DUMBLEDORE! WHAT THE @#$% ARE YOU THINKING SENDING POOR HARRY BACK TO THOSE AWFUL MUGGLES AFTER WHAT THEY DID TO HIM!!!??? HE'LL BE DEAD BY NEXT SEPTEMBER! PUT ONE OF HARRY'S TOES IN THE DIRECTION OF THE DURSLEYS AND I SEE TO IT YOU ARE OUT OF A JOB!!! (I know it may not sound like Molly but you get the point)). Also if he wants Harry to trust him, removing Harry from the Dursleys won't cut it. Its a good start but it will take more then that. Belated birthday present(s) would help (assuming this chapter takes place on Harry's birthday). Also, I hope Dumbledore informs Snape of Harry's treatment and of Harry's explosive little problem not only for Snape's safety but for the safety of those who are nearby when Snape is around Harry (that's assuming Dumbledore lets Harry go to Hogwarts in his present condition). Reviewer: DebbieO Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 07:01PM Title: Consequences Great story. I look forward to seeing where you take it. Reviewer: Laurendcg05 Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 06:12PM Title: Consequences Well, that's how it should have happened it Canon, Dumbledore should have been the one to go to the Dursley's and deliver Harry's Hogwarts letter. This was such a good chapter and shows the years of experience Harry has had at hiding his emotions and his intelligence. I can't wait for the next chapter, I will predict that Harry is taken to either St. Mungo's or Hogwarts to be taken care of, and the Weasley's will meet him there. I may be completely off, but I know that no matter how long it takes, the Weasley's, esp. Ginny, will help him. Keep up the wonderful work! Reviewer: Seeker Sis Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 05:02PM Title: Consequences Jim! Come quickly. Your readers have been left in the cupboard; we're curled in a foetal position with our backs facing the door. Please awaken us so we can go to the next chapter! Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 04:38PM Title: Consequences Well, Jim, this is the chapter I thought should have been in PS/SS instead of the one Rowling wrote. If Harry is as psychologically impared as you make him out to be, instead of finding a savior in either Dumbledore, McGonagall or Hagrid, Harry is right to think of these people as his goalers instead of his saviors. I don't blame him one iota for curling up in his cupboard and wishing them away or trying to blow up the Dursley's house because of his locked-away emotions. The one thing I was surprised at was that neither Arthur nor Molly came to the Dursleys with Dumbledore. I should have thought that Molly would have jumped at the chance to come meet the boy she and Arthur had pledged to take in and, knowing Molly and her love for children, she would have talked-up her family in such a way that Harry would have wanted to come with them instead of hiding as he did. However, this is your story and I'm looking forward to the next chapters. They will be read and reviewed as soon as they come out. Reviewer: dougal74 Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 03:02PM Title: Consequences A fantastic chapter, you really know how to play with peoples emotions. Reviewer: General Kenobi Signed Date: 2008.01.18 - 12:27PM Title: Consequences OMG! Update soon! Cliffhangers are evil! hahaha! | |||||||
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