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Reviewer: FlaGinnyGirl Signed Date: 2010.04.14 - 01:01AM Title: Conflict

OMG this is hard to read. Part of me feels sorry for Petunia part of me thinks she's an effing Bitch! (can I say that???)
The ONLY way I am getting through this is the fact that I know it all works out in the end.

Author's Response: Before writing the story, I researched behaviors and outcomes of abused children. Given the approach I had taken, I wanted to incorporate some of that into the story. The actions and descriptions could have been worse, unfortunately. Then, some of the wonderful reviewers of the story discussed situations they were aware of, and your heart just goes out to these kids. The other reaction is how you described your feelings about Petunia's negative actions. It does get better. Thanks for your reviews. -- Jim



Reviewer: hpf2114 Signed Date: 2009.12.02 - 12:06AM Title: Conflict

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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.10.11 - 07:01AM Title: Conflict

Hmm its kinda sad that I like this story I mean you are doing terrible things to Harry (though I think they happened we just don't know it) Almost makes me feel bad for liking this story so much. Though I think your aproaching a point were you might damage him to much I don't know if this is supposed to be just the years before Hogwarts than Cannon or not... I just know I think with the way things are going and headed that you are going to have to writed Hogwarts and some damage control since the Dursleys could really mess him up. Think its going to be really sad when Harry no longer dreams about his parents and others at least now he still remembers them wonder how long that will happen.

Author's Response: Hang in there and take solace in the title of the story. Thanks for your reviews. -- Jim



Reviewer: charlz1983 Signed Date: 2008.09.15 - 04:11PM Title: Conflict

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oh poor harry. its going to get worse as well.

onto the next one then!

Author's Response: Charlz, you're right, unfortunately, about the Dursleys' behavior. -- Jim



Reviewer: Abraxan Signed Date: 2008.08.23 - 06:44PM Title: Conflict

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Oh, poor Harry. You've done a really good job of portraying the life of a neglected and emotionally abused child. And you've humanized Petunia in a way I haven't seen before - for once, I could almost believe she and Lily were actually related. Nice job!

Abraxan

Author's Response: Hi Lynda, I did research into neglected and abused children prior to starting the story. It's really sad, because the reality is much worse than I portrayed here. I'm glad you feel the descriptions are effective. As for Petunia, I tried to find something worthwhile in her, since Lily was so special. You'll see how she evolves as you progress through the early chapters. Thanks! -- Jim



Reviewer: StrawberrySwirls Signed Date: 2008.07.28 - 08:45PM Title: Conflict

Poor, poor Harry! At least Petunia's being... er- nice-ish. Not the best personality in the world, but at least she's trying to be "nice" to Harry, even though she doesn't want to get dumped. And, at least she's apologizing to Lily. Great chapter! :D

Strawberry ^^

Author's Response: Hi Strawberry, You're really ripping through the early chapters! Petunia is highly conflicted concerning Harry. We'll see which direction she goes. Thanks, Jim



Reviewer: I_love_hpforever Signed Date: 2008.06.26 - 11:08PM Title: Conflict

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*whimpers* Poor little Harry! I love the story by the way but I am close to tears for the poor boy! And poor Petunia! I wish I could find a way to just save them both! Well...I guess I'll have to keep reading! -_^ LOVE IT! *goes to read next chapter*

~Kat

Author's Response: These earlier chapters are hard, because Harry doesn't have many ways to cope with how he is being treated. Thanks for reviewing.



Reviewer: Ginny Guerra Signed Date: 2008.05.10 - 07:51PM Title: Conflict

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I will never understand that kind of cowardice.

Running to the next!

Author's Response: Hi Ginny, Looks like you're making your way through the chapters!

Petunia knows what the right approach is. She lacks the courage to stand up to Vernon, or as you wrote, a kind of cowardice. -- Jim



Reviewer: Rogue28 Signed Date: 2008.01.02 - 11:08PM Title: Conflict

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I'm really impressed by this story. It's relly great to see someone writing about Harry's early years.You conveyed Harry's bewilderment at having to be in a new place without his parents quite well. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I always thought that Harry would be overwhelmed by the unexplained and dramatic changes in his life. Thank you for your very nice comments.



Reviewer: Belcris Signed Date: 2008.01.02 - 11:59AM Title: Conflict

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A great chapter. :) Chris

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Chris!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2008.01.01 - 02:26AM Title: Conflict

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The further I get into this fic the more I loath Vernon. I'd love to take him and shake some sense into the man, but I know it wouldn't do any good; he'd just take his revenge on the one person who is innocent in this situation, Harry. My heart bleeds for that little boy; Petunia's observation that the light has gone out of his eyes nearly made me cry as did his rocking behaviors in his cupboard. I also felt genuine fear when Vernon decided to punish not only Harry for doing accidental magic, but Petunia as well. I haven't decided what I'm feeling for her, but at this point it isn't quite the disgust and repugnance I feel at her actions in canon books five and six. I know her intentions are good, but what she does to Harry in order to keep her marriage on an even keel repulses me and makes me want to take Harry as far away from that family as humanly possible. I don't know... maybe it's my mother's instincts that are making me react this way, but watching her create a freak from a perfectly normal little boy just makes me want to report her and Vernon to the authorities so fast their heads would spin. Then what would Vernon say about gossipy, nosey neighbors!

It is a testiment to the author's ability to tell a story that this fic illicits such negative feelings in this reader.

Author's Response: Hi Arnel, What a great way to start off the New Year. Thank you for your very heartfelt review. My Vernon is very linear. He is acting toward Harry as he was treated as a child, and we can see Dudley carrying on the family "tradition." Both are deserving of your enmity. Petunia, on the other hand, is dealing with a much wider range of influences, but will soon come to a final decision regarding her treatment of Harry. Thank you for your comments! -- Jim



Reviewer: Seeker Sis Signed Date: 2007.12.28 - 04:27PM Title: Conflict

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I am surprised and intrigued by Petunia's softness toward Harry, and the apparent closeness she still feels toward her sister. I want to get into their house and shake Petunia by the shoulders, so she will wake up and realize the world she had before Vernon had to be so much better than the one she has with him now. It poses the age-old question of why women stay in abusive situations. I am eager to read more to see how far you are able to take Petunia's internal struggle. Well done!

Seeker Sis

Author's Response: Hi Sis! Petunia is trying to make up to Lily by treating Harry better than Vernon would like. Of course, this occurs only when Vernon isn't around. As the two cousins get older and start school, her ability to do this will change dramatically. I'm glad you are enjoying Petunia's character, as I have had fun writing her. Thanks, Jim



Reviewer: tear_away Signed Date: 2007.12.26 - 08:33PM Title: Conflict

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Another good chapter Jim, well written as always and again very, very emotive. Reading this it is really possible to understand 3yr old Harry's inner confusions and his hurt, and you also have got Petunia's emotions down as well, she is really sorry but is so cosumed with her own life and thoughts that she is mistreating Harry even though she knows its wrong. Brilliant. 10/10 Another Vote from me.


Craig

Author's Response: Hi Craig, Thanks for the wonderful review! I'm really glad you think I captured Harry's confusion and Petunia's conflicting emotions. And thanks for the votes -- they're always appreciated! With the site problems and the Holidays, I've not been able to get to your story as soon as I would have liked. I plan on rectifying that situation tomorrow. Hope your Holidays have been and will continue to be fun! Best, Jim



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