Reviews For Harry Potter and the Origins of Reality
Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.11.16 - 12:51PM Title: Chapter Three: An Unexplained Language
Sorry, and don't consider this as a flame...but this chapter seemed a bit stilted, and clipped, and anyways isn't a word. (one of my favorite gripes. Something about the writing style was just 'off'' somehow. I know what you're thinking...if you don't like it, don't read it. The problem is...I DO like it the story. Since I don't write, I realize I have no right to critique those who do.
Reviewer: jeff64108 Signed Date: 2007.11.14 - 09:49AM Title: Chapter Three: An Unexplained Language
Reviewer: cherrion Signed Date: 2007.11.14 - 05:42AM Title: Chapter Three: An Unexplained Language
I really rose & Harry being really close. There is a real innocense to it.