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Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.11.16 - 12:51PM Title: Chapter Three: An Unexplained Language

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Sorry, and don't consider this as a flame...but this chapter seemed a bit stilted, and clipped, and anyways isn't a word. (one of my favorite gripes. Something about the writing style was just 'off'' somehow. I know what you're thinking...if you don't like it, don't read it. The problem is...I DO like it the story. Since I don't write, I realize I have no right to critique those who do.

Other than that...DD seems to be really keeping his [romise to look out for the kins...er weapons. Serius had the right of it. The fact that everyone trusts the master manipulator is still amazing to me.

Darian.

Author's Response: Erm... right... ~PotterBoy



Reviewer: jeff64108 Signed Date: 2007.11.14 - 09:49AM Title: Chapter Three: An Unexplained Language

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Reviewer: cherrion Signed Date: 2007.11.14 - 05:42AM Title: Chapter Three: An Unexplained Language

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I really rose & Harry being really close. There is a real innocense to it.

It will be interesting to see how things turn out.

keep up the good work,


Chris

Author's Response: Hey hey! you share a name with my partner in this project! ~PotterBoy




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