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Reviewer: hushpuppy22 Signed Date: 2007.11.30 - 02:14AM Title: Chapter Two: Destiny and Decisions

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Reviewer: Dragyn Signed Date: 2007.11.14 - 11:45AM Title: Chapter Two: Destiny and Decisions

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Nice story so far. I like the pacing, though I hope you will slow it down at least a little as the story starts to enter its own.

You may already have this handled, but there seems to be an obnoxious plot hole you should fill sooner rather than later. In the 'original' timeline, Dumbledore placed Harry with the Dursleys not only because they were his family or the protection their blood could provide, but because Sirius was a convicted murderer and Dumbledore's decisions would be accepted on their behalf because of his status. Thats not the case here. If Sirius is alive, and is their godfather (you havnt said anything countering that particular fact,) then Dumbledore would not have the authority to make that kind of unilateral decision.

Anyway, I look forward to more.

Author's Response: We did not do this because we feel that Sirius would trust Dumbledore on this. It will become a b it more clear after a few more chapters. Once they get to school if you have any questions regarding this I will answer them. I'd rather not give anything away at the present time. No I do not count them going to school as giving anything away. Thank you for your review. -Zero(Chris)



Reviewer: 01hari Signed Date: 2007.11.13 - 12:35PM Title: Chapter Two: Destiny and Decisions

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this is good chapter. Will you completely ignore the universe where harry blows up and continue this story by writing from 1 year old? If you want to make them powerful in this story than please let sirius take harry and his sister to his own protection ignoring dumbledore and had them trained in magic early on.

Author's Response: Thanks. And just wait, you'll see how everything turns out




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